Good morning,
I decided to rewrite my profile. Be great if some people can read through and give some feedback please. I am into kink too so have tried to combine swinging and BDSM together 
Thanks in advance.
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You need to proofread it. What is “sintelissing” when it’s at home? Also “escalades”. I wouldn’t normally pick someone up on spelling and grammar, but when you seem to be trying to put yourself across as intellectual by using lots of fancy words, you need to make sure they’re correct.
As for the content - if you’re happy that it represents you accurately, it doesn’t matter what other people think. It would be a no from me, but I’m sure there will be plenty of women who do like it. |
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"You need to proofread it. What is “sintelissing” when it’s at home? Also “escalades”. I wouldn’t normally pick someone up on spelling and grammar, but when you seem to be trying to put yourself across as intellectual by using lots of fancy words, you need to make sure they’re correct.
As for the content - if you’re happy that it represents you accurately, it doesn’t matter what other people think. It would be a no from me, but I’m sure there will be plenty of women who do like it."
Hey thanks I am dyslexic so I try my best,,,, |
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"You need to proofread it. What is “sintelissing” when it’s at home? Also “escalades”. I wouldn’t normally pick someone up on spelling and grammar, but when you seem to be trying to put yourself across as intellectual by using lots of fancy words, you need to make sure they’re correct.
As for the content - if you’re happy that it represents you accurately, it doesn’t matter what other people think. It would be a no from me, but I’m sure there will be plenty of women who do like it.
Hey thanks I am dyslexic so I try my best,,,,"
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