Your whole profile comes across as self depreciating and doesn't make an initial impression that you'll be fun to spend time with.
Your opening line comes across as 'there is nothing worth saying about me' which is not likely to be the case, and certainly not the impression I think you intend to make. You then go on to say your much more lively in person, but your pics say otherwise. You have three very similar photo's, and haven't smiled in any of them. Cambridge is a beautiful City, why not go out and take some nice selfies at a local landmark or by the river?
You have said 'I'm pretty much into everything will always try things once' but then you have deleted half the interests, contradicting yourself a little. Why not say more about what you actually are into, or would like to experience.
In the eight weeks you have been here you have already met with a couple in person, that's not a bad start 
I would also suggest a quick spelling/puntuation check, you'd be surprised just how many people are put of by the little things.
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"Your whole profile comes across as self depreciating and doesn't make an initial impression that you'll be fun to spend time with.
Your opening line comes across as 'there is nothing worth saying about me' which is not likely to be the case, and certainly not the impression I think you intend to make. You then go on to say your much more lively in person, but your pics say otherwise. You have three very similar photo's, and haven't smiled in any of them. Cambridge is a beautiful City, why not go out and take some nice selfies at a local landmark or by the river?
You have said 'I'm pretty much into everything will always try things once' but then you have deleted half the interests, contradicting yourself a little. Why not say more about what you actually are into, or would like to experience.
In the eight weeks you have been here you have already met with a couple in person, that's not a bad start
I would also suggest a quick spelling/puntuation check, you'd be surprised just how many people are put of by the little things.
Good luck "
Thank you ill change it as soon as I can |
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