Hi everybody. So I posted yesterday about my badly presented profile. I've since tryed to improve it. I would really appreciate some feed back on it if you would take the time to have a look..... All feed back welcome positive and negative..... Thank you ?? |
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Plus points: at least you've asked for help.
Minus points: there are a wealth of posts on this subject - and answers. It still doesn't really give much information about you - and what makes you different to all the other men on here.
Observations: It's very unlikely that women will initiate contact - you will have to do all the legwork.
Suggestions: use paragraphs, avoid using too many cliches
Rating: could do better |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Lots better, nice and light hearted. Treat it as a work in progress as you find your feet in this funny alternate universe.
As said earlier on this thread, women are unlikely to initiate contact with you so please don't sit back and wait for a long line of salivating minxes to appear at your door.
Stick at it and try to retain a jolly outlook.
Best of British to you though. |
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High heels thank you. It sure is work in progress and I'm sure I'll work my way up. It helps a lot with people like you guys helping out the new users and the advice will be taken on board and hope fully I'll build up a good profile. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Hi Charlielad, I commented on your original post. I'd say your profile is definitely a lot better, think of it as a work in progress and add to it as you go along. Well done for asking for the advice and taking it on boars. Good luck |
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I never saw your first profile but the one you have is not bad.
I'd maybe add some paragraphs to make it easyer to read.
Also keep adding when ever you think of something.
Think yours is the first I've saw with no cock pic.
Bonus point for leading with a pic with your face on it. Good luck.
Xxxx |
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By *odareyouMan
over a year ago
not far from iceland,,,,,, tescos is nearer though :-) (near leeds) |
There's loads of threads offering generic profile advice in the archives... Absorb and interpret the info then put it into your words..
Happy reading and writing.. |
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well done for acting on advice 
