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I have so many scenes in my head.

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By (user no longer on site) OP    25 weeks ago

You want to create a cool scene? Sit on a

chair, spread your legs, and take your cock

out. Grab a glass of whiskey with ice for yourself(and cigarette if you smoke) . Pour a bit of whiskey on your cock

and say to her, 'Suck me.'

She will keep sucking until you finish the glass. When you finish

the glass, throw her into the bed, take a cube of ice in your mouth, and use it to lick her pussy

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By (user no longer on site) 25 weeks ago


"You want to create a cool scene? Sit on a

chair, spread your legs, and take your cock

out. Grab a glass of whiskey with ice for yourself(and cigarette if you smoke) . Pour a bit of whiskey on your cock

and say to her, 'Suck me.'

She will keep sucking until you finish the glass. When you finish

the glass, throw her into the bed, take a cube of ice in your mouth, and use it to lick her pussy"

Thank you this has cured my insomnia

Goodnight

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By *rthur WrightusMan 25 weeks ago

Round the Bend


"You want to create a cool scene? Sit on a

chair, spread your legs, and take your cock

out. Grab a glass of whiskey with ice for yourself(and cigarette if you smoke) . Pour a bit of whiskey on your cock

and say to her, 'Suck me.'

She will keep sucking until you finish the glass. When you finish

the glass, throw her into the bed, take a cube of ice in your mouth, and use it to lick her pussy"

Not keen on Whiskey, does Rum have same effect ?

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By (user no longer on site) 25 weeks ago


"You want to create a cool scene? Sit on a

chair, spread your legs, and take your cock

out. Grab a glass of whiskey with ice for yourself(and cigarette if you smoke) . Pour a bit of whiskey on your cock

and say to her, 'Suck me.'

She will keep sucking until you finish the glass. When you finish

the glass, throw her into the bed, take a cube of ice in your mouth, and use it to lick her pussy

Not keen on Whiskey, does Rum have same effect ? "

Brandy makes you randy

Whiskey makes you frisky

Rum makes you cum.

You choose.

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By *enk15Man 25 weeks ago

Evesham

Can I use flaming sambuca?

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By *naswingdressWoman 25 weeks ago

Manchester (she/her)

I think the creation of a good scene is more than just the mechanics. Particularly in written form.

As a woman - even if it is written well - I'm not sure what's in it for me, in this.

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By *naswingdressWoman 25 weeks ago

Manchester (she/her)

oh. I was so put off by the style of writing that I missed the "licking of pussy"

still... nah.

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By *ornycougaWoman 25 weeks ago

WHEREVER I LAY MY HAT

I do wish people would stay in the Stories and Fantasies area where they belong

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By *eyond PurityCouple 25 weeks ago

Lincolnshire

I’d just create the scene instead of describing it and trying to make it sound hot. That way people can visualise it too…

K

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By *punk n gushCouple 25 weeks ago

deal


"You want to create a cool scene? Sit on a

chair, spread your legs, and take your cock

out. Grab a glass of whiskey with ice for yourself(and cigarette if you smoke) . Pour a bit of whiskey on your cock

and say to her, 'Suck me.'

She will keep sucking until you finish the glass. When you finish

the glass, throw her into the bed, take a cube of ice in your mouth, and use it to lick her pussy

Not keen on Whiskey, does Rum have same effect ?

Brandy makes you randy

Whiskey makes you frisky

Rum makes you cum.

You choose. "

Best have all 3 then

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By *nightsoftheCoffeeTableCouple 25 weeks ago

Leeds

Whisky 🤮

I'm out.

Mrs

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By *rthur WrightusMan 25 weeks ago

Round the Bend


"Can I use flaming sambuca?"

Nah, fire regs, sounds hot tho

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By (user no longer on site) 25 weeks ago

With a little more work it might be more appealing.

Not to me, personally.

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By (user no longer on site) OP    25 weeks ago

You don't like the scene?

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By *naswingdressWoman 25 weeks ago

Manchester (she/her)


"You don't like the scene?"

It has potential for some people to be interested in it.

But it's bare bones mechanics, and it doesn't do that well either. Writing sex, writing desire, is far more than that.

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By (user no longer on site) OP    25 weeks ago

Try to picture

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By *naswingdressWoman 25 weeks ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Try to picture "

I'm perfectly capable of picturing it.

In order to turn it from something as appealing as the instructions that come with my toaster, I need to do the work to insert emotion, tension, characters, imagery, etc.

That work is yours, as the writer. You paint the picture for the reader to absorb.

The fact that I'm able to overcome the weaknesses in your prose does not make your writing good. It makes me knowledgeable about how this works, and with the kind of disposition to do it myself.

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By *eroLondonMan 25 weeks ago

Mayfair

I hope it works for you, OP. It sounds too prescriptive to me and somewhat transactional. 🌈

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan 25 weeks ago

A den in the Glen


"You want to create a cool scene? Sit on a

chair, spread your legs, and take your cock

out. Grab a glass of whiskey with ice for yourself(and cigarette if you smoke) . Pour a bit of whiskey on your cock

and say to her, 'Suck me.'

She will keep sucking until you finish the glass. When you finish

the glass, throw her into the bed, take a cube of ice in your mouth, and use it to lick her pussy"

I kind of did this with red wine and Maltesers instead of whisky and a cigarette. She did suck extremely well and it's captured in one of my pics.

She also lay on her back afterwards whilst I paid her lots of attention and she scoffed all the Maltesers FFS!

That was a scene, not a fantasy. 😂

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By (user no longer on site) 25 weeks ago

I don’t really get much from sucking cock. I know it’s trendy to say ‘I prefer giving to receiving’ but I really do prefer receiving. Giving I can take or leave

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan 25 weeks ago

A den in the Glen


"I don’t really get much from sucking cock "

Imagine if it had been in a folded pizza, there would be cheese, pepperoni, mushroom and pineapple for you to enjoy.

*Ok hold the cheese. 😲

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By *orthern StarsCouple 25 weeks ago

Durham

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By *orthern StarsCouple 25 weeks ago

Durham

I get where you're coming from and that scene definitely sounds hot to me!!

I'm often thinking of scenarios and fantasies, that I would love to happen.

Nothing wrong at all with putting scenes/fantasies into words either, as people can scroll on by if it's not for them.

Ruby

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By (user no longer on site) OP    25 weeks ago

At least one person with common sense

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan 25 weeks ago

A den in the Glen


"At least one person with common sense "

Each to their own OP. I'm just picturing Swiss Tong doing this. Don't mind me.

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