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By *idsmatey OP Man
over a year ago
Warwickshire |
I've been a FAB member for a few years now and over them years I have altered, amended, removed and added information to my profile..
Following a further amendment today I'm asking myself is the profile information to over the top now? Is there too much detail that people may just stop reading because of the length of it all.
Any constructive criticism positive or negative will be appreciated.
Ken
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By *oodmessMan
over a year ago
yumsville |
its a bit very long... and rather than promoting it reads more like a begging letter - no offence.
youve tried to include too many buzz words rather than making it your own - but if it works, it works... |
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By *idsmatey OP Man
over a year ago
Warwickshire |
"its a bit very long... and rather than promoting it reads more like a begging letter - no offence.
youve tried to include too many buzz words rather than making it your own - but if it works, it works..."
None taken.. I will revisit it Friday me thinks and probably start a fresh..  |
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