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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Hey there

New to the forums so go easy on me

Love to get some advice in my profile. Too much, too short - does it strike the right tone ? Have I missed anything obvious ?

Thanks in advance

Dhillon

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By *nnocentimesMan over a year ago

over there by that tree

That’s actually not to bad, great picture btw, could add a few more like it for variety.

I would add some meat to the bio to what you are looking for and what you could offer / want to explore.

Good start

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

If you explain why you cannot accommodate then people might understand why you cannot accommodate

Your first profile text line sounds great but can also be interpreted in a different way.

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

Your first profile text line sounds great but can also be interpreted in a different way."

Yes, it can read as though you are looking for a woman who wants to explore her sexuality with another woman.

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By *allySlinkyWoman over a year ago

Leeds

I find your profile name hard to read. The "tit" in the middle stands out first.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Well over a year here so you could add to it and the one pic you have isn't really appealing so try adding more.

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"Well over a year here so you could add to it and the one pic you have isn't really appealing so try adding more. "

Add more pics - what you think ?

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"I find your profile name hard to read. The "tit" in the middle stands out first."

Good call out - changed username - easier to read

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"That’s actually not to bad, great picture btw, could add a few more like it for variety.

I would add some meat to the bio to what you are looking for and what you could offer / want to explore.

Good start

Added - what do you think ?

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

"If you explain why you cannot accommodate then people might understand why you cannot accommodate

Your first profile text line sounds great but can also be interpreted in a different way."

Added

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By *tephTV67TV/TS over a year ago

Cheshire

You’ll sell yourself on your pictures as the text could’ve been lifted off several hundred other profiles from men. The third paragraph especially, until you have verifications to back up your claim about you being ‘very much about the woman’s pleasure’ it’s just words on a profile currently.

I do like the pictures as I think they definitely look good and imaginative, I just wish the text had the same effort.

Good luck Op

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By *oncupiscence73Woman over a year ago

South

Ha lovely photos!!! Didn’t even read the profile Tbf

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Ha ha - thanks Qadesh

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Thanks Steph for the feedback. Text is all mine , but you are right it's hard to prove : unfortunately they just words until I get a verification

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Looks a Decent Profile to me. Good pics and a little something to read but not too much..

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Thanks Sassy

And can I just say, wow you are smoking ! If you ever down south, ping me

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By *atBottomGirlsWoman over a year ago

St Austell-ish

"If you explain why you cannot accommodate then people might understand why you cannot accommodate

Your first profile text line sounds great but can also be interpreted in a different way.

Added "

If you can't accommodate solely because you have a child, you might want to remove the pictures where you're wearing a wedding ring.

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By *tephTV67TV/TS over a year ago

Cheshire

"If you explain why you cannot accommodate then people might understand why you cannot accommodate

Your first profile text line sounds great but can also be interpreted in a different way.

Added

If you can't accommodate solely because you have a child, you might want to remove the pictures where you're wearing a wedding ring.

Busted

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By *nnocentimesMan over a year ago

over there by that tree

"That’s actually not to bad, great picture btw, could add a few more like it for variety.

I would add some meat to the bio to what you are looking for and what you could offer / want to explore.

Good start

Added - what do you think ? "

Lose the hunt bit at the end and there’s nothing wrong with it!

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