Hi all
Hope you are all well  would like some criticism or positive comments  about my profile?
am i missing anything or would you change anything
What photo would you put as my main display photo
thank to you all in advance |
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
To be honest it reads like so many that hope to bend to whatever the reader wants. "I'm dominant but I'll be submissive if you want instead" is basically all it says, like so many others with the "scatter gun" approach. |
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"To be honest it reads like so many that hope to bend to whatever the reader wants. "I'm dominant but I'll be submissive if you want instead" is basically all it says, like so many others with the "scatter gun" approach. "
so are you saying to be more direct?
just say it how it is?  |
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By *atenaWoman
over a year ago
Hyde |
Sooo...
You're not Dom... you're switch. And you're looking for someone to Top or Domme you?
I'm not sure
What do you like ...to give.. to do... to receive ... what are you looking for?
And as the others have said... pics are great! |
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"Sooo...
You're not Dom... you're switch. And you're looking for someone to Top or Domme you?
I'm not sure
What do you like ...to give.. to do... to receive ... what are you looking for?
And as the others have said... pics are great!"
thankyou i shall clear that up im re doing the profile now |
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"  ALL HAD BEEN UPDATED WHAT DO YOU THINK?"
I don’t like the word ‘f****r’ on your profile. ‘Gents’ don’t swear.
Text is still not impressive.
No initial capital letters, punctuation and the grammar is rubbish.
Try again please. |
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
"English Gent although Confident and dominant"
Although? Are other English gents normally shy and submissive?
Still just reads as a scatter gun approach, with classic over used "titles", with zero elaboration on them.
If it's a true reflection of you, someone that's picked up on a few words with no real understanding of them, then don't change a thing. |
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
Your pictures are very good, your biog lets down what could be a great profile.
Not sure how to phrase this, it lacks cohesion. The sentences don't seem connected, it doesn't flow.
It's like you've seem some phrases you liked and plonked them into your profile.
Pictures 10/10
Biog 3/10
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying "
Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Single men, in a very competitive market do.
Just saying......
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"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying "
Wow the thread was about OPs profile. If you don’t like the honest feedback he’s asked for then skip by the thread rather than try to cause issues. Enjoy your day. |
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"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying
Wow the thread was about OPs profile. If you don’t like the honest feedback he’s asked for then skip by the thread rather than try to cause issues. Enjoy your day."
There’s honest feedback and there’s being a little rude & that’s all I have to say on that  |
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"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying
Wow the thread was about OPs profile. If you don’t like the honest feedback he’s asked for then skip by the thread rather than try to cause issues. Enjoy your day.
There’s honest feedback and there’s being a little rude & that’s all I have to say on that "
All there is is honest feedback. So many men on this site so a profile of a man has to be interesting and stand out or the man will get no interest at all from ladies but if you don’t like honesty then I suggest you skip the thread. |
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
"Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Strange response - us guys deserve just as much effort as coupes and singles do.... "
I think you've missed my point by a very long way.
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By *ankie303Woman
over a year ago
Weirdsville South Coast Dorset |
"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying "
I try to make mine as repelling and negative as possible  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying "
The op asked for advice though, and people are giving their opinion.
Op - the title is terrible, no Dom worth his salt would even mention 50 shades, and the test needs redoing.
I would delete that and start again.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Dude I think your profile is fine , the negative comments are coming from those with hardly fantastic profiles themselves - just saying
The op asked for advice though, and people are giving their opinion.
Op - the title is terrible, no Dom worth his salt would even mention 50 shades, and the test needs redoing.
I would delete that and start again.
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"Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Strange response - us guys deserve just as much effort as coupes and singles do....
I think you've missed my point by a very long way.
E"
I’m only commenting on your response  |
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
"Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Strange response - us guys deserve just as much effort as coupes and singles do....
I think you've missed my point by a very long way.
E
I’m only commenting on your response "
You've just confirmed what I said.
Point missed by a very long way.
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"Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Strange response - us guys deserve just as much effort as coupes and singles do....
I think you've missed my point by a very long way.
E
I’m only commenting on your response
You've just confirmed what I said.
Point missed by a very long way.
E"
Why isn’t there a yawn emoji |
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By * Plus ECouple
over a year ago
The South |
"Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Strange response - us guys deserve just as much effort as coupes and singles do....
I think you've missed my point by a very long way.
E
I’m only commenting on your response
You've just confirmed what I said.
Point missed by a very long way.
E
Why isn’t there a yawn emoji "
Read my entire comment, not the out of context sentence your obsessed with.
Posts like yours are entirely yawn worthy, it's a great idea.
It's seems basic comprehension are beyond you.
They're not even big words for God's sake.
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"Women and couples don't necessarily need amazing profiles.
Strange response - us guys deserve just as much effort as coupes and singles do....
I think you've missed my point by a very long way.
E
I’m only commenting on your response
You've just confirmed what I said.
Point missed by a very long way.
E
Why isn’t there a yawn emoji
Read my entire comment, not the out of context sentence your obsessed with.
Posts like yours are entirely yawn worthy, it's a great idea.
It's seems basic comprehension are beyond you.
They're not even big words for God's sake.
E"
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Photos are nice but I think we're all little bored of men (read boys) who think "50 Shades" is both aspirational and something you just have a crack at without experience and due care.
I would tidy up the spelling/grammar. And sometimes (often) less is more |
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By *JCouple
over a year ago
Teesside |
"I didn't mean to start an argument guys ????  "
The first thing to do is decide if you want to write in the 1st or 3rd person. Currently your jumping between the 2 styles (even mid sentence) and its awful to read.
Agree with the other points raised.
The 2 pictures and your profile picture are good though.
KJ |
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