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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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ive seen a few people on here do this since ive joined so might as well give it a go and get ripped to bits haha what do you think to me and my profile |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"i really didnt think it was a struggle to read but at least no one has ripped my pics haha  "
Well, to be fair, you have asked people to give their opinon on your profile. Most comments refer to the way it is written. Poor grammar and puctuation, and the fact that it's all clumped together with no real coherant sentence construction makes it difficult to read. As has been said, if it's difficult to read, people won't bother and will simply move on to the next person. It's about demonstrating effort. And why shouldn't your English matter? What is wrong with people these days? Many have suggested to others to treat your fab profile like you would a CV. This is your advert. Take your time with it and put the effort in.
That said, so far you have been given some sound advice and in each case you've chosen to come back with some kind of smart arse response or another, so it's quite clear what your attityde is.
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