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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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My profile is blunt and straight to point I was told by a lovely lady that it was not that she didn't like it but maybe that's what's scaring some girls off aside from my pics lmao  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It's to the point but not got that eye catching sparkle to us.
Any suggestions? "
To be honest we don't get the Please, Attain, Knowledge bit.
What is all that about?
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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To be honest, and I really don't want to come across as bad, it does not seem that English is your first language? There are sentences of which I can make no sense. |
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"To be honest, and I really don't want to come across as bad, it does not seem that English is your first language? There are sentences of which I can make no sense."
English is my first language just I've added bits at random I did not write the profile in one go.
I add bits here and there as I go |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"It's to the point but not got that eye catching sparkle to us.
Any suggestions?
To be honest we don't get the Please, Attain, Knowledge bit.
What is all that about?
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It was something I saw and thought it kinda of made sense one thought about it |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"It's to the point but not got that eye catching sparkle to us.
Any suggestions?
To be honest we don't get the Please, Attain, Knowledge bit.
What is all that about?
It was something I saw and thought it kinda of made sense one thought about it "
To be honest we can't make sense of it.
That four letter word starting with P is a vile racist word, whoever uses it.
And to be honest, in our opinion, it makes just as vile reading in your profile.
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By (user no longer on site)
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"To be honest, and I really don't want to come across as bad, it does not seem that English is your first language? There are sentences of which I can make no sense.
English is my first language just I've added bits at random I did not write the profile in one go.
I add bits here and there as I go "
Then my suggestion would be to check the grammar. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"To be honest, and I really don't want to come across as bad, it does not seem that English is your first language? There are sentences of which I can make no sense.
English is my first language just I've added bits at random I did not write the profile in one go.
I add bits here and there as I go
Then my suggestion would be to check the grammar."
And think again about using that P word please it is an offensive word. |
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