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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Looking for advice and comments on our profile please. Our bio and pictures
Be honest as we know we're not perfect but feedback whether positive or negative would be good
Thanks guys |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Looking for advice and comments on our profile please. Our bio and pictures
Be honest as we know we're not perfect but feedback whether positive or negative would be good
Thanks guys "
I would get rid of the negative stuff. Saying what you don't want won't deter them but just casts a shadow over your profile.
Grammar and spelling. Sentences start with a capital letter and end with a full-stop rather than a comma. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks guys the capital letters were added as we were getting bombarded with winks and mails from couples and singles alike who clearly hadn't bothered reading the profile and excuse our poor grammar but mr is a former soldier and bodyguard not an English teacher |
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