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Profile review case number 696969
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Another guy and another request to review there profile.
Not really sure where I'm going wrong? Poor picture choice, repulsively ugly, rubbish content?
Fab, give me your verdict, I bow in your infinite wisdom. I need to find a victim  I mean the right woman to take my fab virginity. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Just my view you understand
End of profile just say you can wassap,kik or Skype
Your profile reads as being very very cocky.
I would change some of the words as it sounds to posh if you get me
The pic with you pointing and the sgl bicep pose - self absorbed
Just my view mate |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I think it's just, strong confidence, not quite arrogance but I like it 
It's clear and reads through well.
Images tip slightly into arrogant area but if you like them, all good
Move north  "
This for me too, except move to the depths of nowhere Norfolk lol. I'm not a fan of mirror pics personally but as you have a variety that is better. Good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for the feedback. May have to change the tone as I'm far from arrogant.
Understand my pictures need some work, too. But no worse, or posery than the 6 pack brigade on fab.
Might have to go Back to the drawing board. |
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Good pics, got yourself on cam to be verified, a meet request posted, thought out profile text. You don't look or sound arrogant to me. Not much to change in my view -all the s's doesn't make sense with the rest of the text and couples welcome is duplicated as previous paragraph says you'll meet couples. Good luck x |
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"Work out more. You'll get biceps like mine. 
I can only dream, pal. "
Dream on, it's taken years of office desk work and gym avoidance to get them beasts.
Its a good profile and pics except for the balloon ears one which I believe I mentioned once some weeks ago. |
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Not sure if you are interested in the view of a TV but here goes anyway.
I think you have taken the time to write a really well thought out profile. It comes over as confident not arrogant, which is an attractive quality in a guy.
Your pics are lush and I'm sure once you get a couple of verifications you will do very well.
I wouldn't change much just be patient |
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Apart from that I honestly can't see anything wrong with your profile. 
Other than that it seems good to me 
Keep at it 