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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Would some of you more experienced ladies / fellas kindly give me some feedback on my Profile? To be honest I'm battling to make headway or progress, any constructive advice appreciated...

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By *thwalescplCouple  over a year ago

brecon

I'd lose the action shot featuring some random female, from previous threads it doesn't seem to go down well.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Aha, that's interesting feedback, and appreciated, will consider this...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Looks good to me OP.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

The bios fine I would say. Couple of pictures and think your sorted. Definitely not the worst profile I've seen looking for advice

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Sorry op but I lost interest after about the 5th paragraph and skimmed over the rest...

Why not edit it and save some info for when you do manage to meet someone, then you might have something to talk about

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Mmmmm, so the longer bio ends up a tad boring, thats constructive crit, appreciated, will consider that for sure... Thanks!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

A lot of preamble with no attention to providing the reader with of the sort of information required to gauge sexual compatibility....

For me its save so much time and I'm less inclined to respond to members who expect me spend my time asking them for that sort of information when it much easier to just click to a profile that provides it up front ...

But apart from that looks fine to me if perhaps a tad long

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thanks for that! I'm whittling it down...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

To be fair, it is a little on the long side and so you'll find that many won't bother reading it.

I'd try and trim it down a bit and focus on relevant info. Whilst your hobbies may be fascinating, I very much doubt anyone else on here cares - unless perhaps you're looking for someone to join you on some of these past times.

After reading all the way through your profile I still didn't get any sense of what you're looking for or what you bring to the table - other than you're looking for single females / couples - which of course will be obvious to anyone looking at your 'what you're looking for' section.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

That's a good point... Thanks!

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By *londieddWoman  over a year ago

fife

as others have said, very well written albeit a bit of a long read!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Sorry op but I lost interest after about the 5th paragraph and skimmed over the rest...

Why not edit it and save some info for when you do manage to meet someone, then you might have something to talk about "

So true... The majority of your profile sounds like it belongs on a dating site for long term romance?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thanks for all the feedback, I've made some changes, hopefully for the better! xxx

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