Nothing much wrong. However personally I would change your photo. You are hiding most of your body with your hands and phone, looks a good body so show it off.
Also remove part about "can't show face due to work" and put as "face pics in private"
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over a year ago
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I agree - body looks good so don't hide it behind your phone 
Perhaps a bit more about what kind of girls you are looking for? Are you happy to meet at clubs?
Good luck x |
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"Honest opinions on my profile. I'm a confident young lad and enjoy honest feedback!
I say it as it is.... I'm probably better than most of you on here  "
So your better than most of us on here then well maybe this site ain't for you find one that your equal to what your looking for |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Delete "been here before and back again! Do people really read these?"
No one likes potential user has left the site. Oh and people do read them.
Photo is low quality and b/w. Change it. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Better
Now go look at your layout and read it aloud to see how it flows. Delete the new line between
Been on the swinging scene for a while now and I
Know what I like
I suggest you do a quick punctuation check. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Confidence is sexy, arrogance is far from it.
Saying you are better than most on here, will probably just get peoples backs up, especially when you are asking for advice."
 exactly
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"Honest opinions on my profile. I'm a confident young lad and enjoy honest feedback!
I say it as it is.... I'm probably better than most of you on here "
If you think you are " better than most on here" Why on earth would you require opinions, and help with pics my lovely? |
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"Honest opinions on my profile. I'm a confident young lad and enjoy honest feedback!
I say it as it is.... I'm probably better than most of you on here "
We are sure you agree that the only thing people see of you on here is your profile and photo.
Looking at them, you do not look 'better than most of you on here'.
So what is it that makes you better?
Words on here are really easy, but those who have a little more maturity tend to use their words wisely rather than making comments that may be taken as arrogant.
So sharpen up your profile and add better pictures.
You did ask for honest opinions, and said you enjoy it. |
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By *rx1Couple
over a year ago
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"Honest opinions on my profile. I'm a confident young lad and enjoy honest feedback!
I say it as it is.... I'm probably better than most of you on here "
why would we rip you apart ? message us, so we can just block you instead, much more fun..Another straight Guy looking for TV's....tut...tut... |
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"If you're looking for some laid back, chilled and ready to go at your pace? I am the guy for you."
Do you mean SOMEONE?
"You will get a fully body experience".. Do you mean FULL body experience? That's a shit line anyway, remove it!
"I'm successful, I know what I want and I know how to get it."
YAWN, that's so fucking dry! And successful people never have to say I'm successful, you sound either full of yourself or not very self aware.
"scineros."
Do you mean SCENARIOS?
"I enjoy quality over quaintly so hope people understand what I mean!"
No, we don't know what the fuck you mean because you can't spell 'quality'. "quaintly"?
"Best thing you can do is drop me a reply and let's work our magic together "
Do you mean drop you a message because a reply is when someone responds to your message.
Overall your write-up makes you look like a right dumbass! Fix these problems so you can be on your way to success my friend |
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""If you're looking for some laid back, chilled and ready to go at your pace? I am the guy for you."
Do you mean SOMEONE?
"You will get a fully body experience".. Do you mean FULL body experience? That's a shit line anyway, remove it!
"I'm successful, I know what I want and I know how to get it."
YAWN, that's so fucking dry! And successful people never have to say I'm successful, you sound either full of yourself or not very self aware.
"scineros."
Do you mean SCENARIOS?
"I enjoy quality over quaintly so hope people understand what I mean!"
No, we don't know what the fuck you mean because you can't spell 'quality'. "quaintly"?
"Best thing you can do is drop me a reply and let's work our magic together "
Do you mean drop you a message because a reply is when someone responds to your message.
Overall your write-up makes you look like a right dumbass! Fix these problems so you can be on your way to success my friend "
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"Shouldn't have gone so arrogant and try to type up your bio at 5am! All updated now so cheer up you miserable people, just banter "
No one needs cheering up on here, we all quite happy!
Some of these posts on here are so comical along with the profiles, that we are certainly far from miserable!!
We noted you used the word 'arrogant' though.... |
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