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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi all. So I'm newish and wanted to know if you would be so good as to give a bit of feedback on my profile. It's not finished yet and going to be adding some more pictures soon.
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
I actually quite like it in a quirky kind of way - as Sally says, it's certainly a different approach.
One suggestion though, and it's not a criticism, but it would benefit from a grammar/spell check/proof read, as it reads a little clunky in places, and ends up detracting from the tongue in cheek feel.
Only other thing to add, would me maybe add a few more pics - the one you have is great, but a few teasing shots would help enhance it even more.
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