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over a year ago
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"I find the mix of "she" and "I" confusing"
I agree with this. I personally would ditch 'she' and replace with I throughout.
It would read as more confident and less disjointed. The swap from one to the other is a little jarring.
Your pics are great!  |
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Very rare for a lady to ask for hints, normally just guys as they're struggling on here. However there is very little that needs improvement, you have stated your preferences, would you consider anyone else who messaged you outside of them ?
But in all honesty, you'll get those chancers anyway.
You could teach a few on here how to write a decent Profile, so nothing really, good luck  |
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