Afternoon all,
Recently updated my profile, well yesterday to be precise.
Old one was a bit outdated.
Will put up some new pictures tonight, my question would be, is the concept of my profile good or does it need more work? |
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"Afternoon all,
Recently updated my profile, well yesterday to be precise.
Old one was a bit outdated.
Will put up some new pictures tonight, my question would be, is the concept of my profile good or does it need more work?"
for me it’s just way too long and I would not read it. For you though it’s clearly working as you have had meets. |
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By *STWO65Couple
over a year ago
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"Afternoon all,
Recently updated my profile, well yesterday to be precise.
Old one was a bit outdated.
Will put up some new pictures tonight, my question would be, is the concept of my profile good or does it need more work? for me it’s just way too long and I would not read it. For you though it’s clearly working as you have had meets. "
A lot of those meets were just socials though weren't they?? |
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"Any advice on what I need to change.
Thought it was quite well written
Yes it is very well written just too long. Personally I would remove the 'what you have done' and fantasy section. "
Thanks Sally, feedback taken, and updated accordingly. Tried to make myself stand out, rather than the normal things |
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