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Why not

By (user no longer on site) OP 9 weeks ago

Anyone people fancy doing a critique of my profile? What would you add, what would you remove? Any thoughts or opinions to improve it?

Any constructive criticism welcome 👍

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By *inchestersBitchWoman 9 weeks ago

land of overweight munters

If you don't want over 60 then why do you have 99 as your top age? Honestly I couldn't read very much as I have a problem with reading blocks of words and I'm sure I'm not the only person.

Check the spelling, there, their, they're

Pics are not very enticing, backgrounds can make all the difference OP

that being said, you know what you want, I got that from the little part I read so hopefully you'll stay true to you

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By *ariaxxxxWoman 9 weeks ago

London/Kent

Your Bio is way too long OP, I glanced at it & I even said to myself jeez I'm not reading that, 2 Paragraphs is enough.

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By *vaRoseWoman 9 weeks ago

Ankh-Morpork

Too long a bio - and yes I’m aware of what a hypocrite that makes me

Pics need some work… effort with poses and lighting

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