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By *iddler83 OP   Man 15 weeks ago

barnet

Please could someone have a look at my profile and give me pointers how to improve it

Thanks

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By *allySlinkyWoman 15 weeks ago

Leeds

I think your photos and text are good but it all looks to me like a dating site profile. There is nothing to suggest an interest in swinging.

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By *onin25Man 15 weeks ago

Durham

A few more photos, maybe some body shots, some arty ones. I don't mean dick pics.

Your text could be more specific about what you're looking for, what you're into and what you offer a prospective partner. And just looks like one big paragraph which can put people off from reading it

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By *ull of PuddinWoman 15 weeks ago

isle of munters

Just a thing I have but I can't read block writing, I find it'd better broken up a bit

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By *vaRoseWoman 15 weeks ago

Ankh-Morpork

Bio reads like it was helped along by chat gpt - nothing wrong with that if that’s what you’re wanting but perhaps use more of your own words too

Pics - nice, but not overly sexy. You’re a good looking guy, and this isn’t a Facebook profile. Maybe add a few more shots in. Teasing, arty, erotic rather than graphic

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By *rightonsteveMan 15 weeks ago

Hove, mainly…

There appears to be absolutely no reference to Star Wars which is bemusing and confusing.

Light Sabres can be very enticing, eh ladies?

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