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Yes that meens you need to reed a profile 
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"In relashoun with rate profile above y not give advice lol
Yes that meens you need to reed a profile
I don't expect this tether will be very bizey lol "Swap the shirt for Xmas jumper and  | |||
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"In relashoun with rate profile above y not give advice lol
Yes that meens you need to reed a profile
I don't expect this tether will be very bizey lol "Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given "What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given
What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. "Tries hard but could do better. Vaguely fuckable, if he'd just stop talking  | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given
What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. "Fair bit of your profile text talks about your female friend and wanting to meet others with her,maybe a cpls profile would be more suitable. | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given
What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. "The only thing I'd say is if you have an fb get a couples profile with her and not go on about her on your single profile. | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given
What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.
Tries hard but could do better.
Vaguely fuckable, if he'd just stop talking "says what he wants it to say. | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given
What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.
The only thing I'd say is if you have an fb get a couples profile with her and not go on about her on your single profile. " | |||
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" Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given
What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.
The only thing I'd say is if you have an fb get a couples profile with her and not go on about her on your single profile.
"Decent profile, good pictures and text says about you and what you're looking for. Above the average profile | |||
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"Perfectly acceptable "A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point. | |||
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"Perfectly acceptable
A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point."Rather a strange thing to suggest. Ligeriariaiaearias profile is one which I spend a lot of time looking at. I guess the wording is ok too | |||
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"Perfectly acceptable
A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point.
Rather a strange thing to suggest. Ligeriariaiaearias profile is one which I spend a lot of time looking at. I guess the wording is ok too "I thank you (I did a curtsey since I am in my pyjamas and have no hat to doff) | |||
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"Perfectly acceptable
A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point.
Rather a strange thing to suggest. Ligeriariaiaearias profile is one which I spend a lot of time looking at. I guess the wording is ok too
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"I'll critique my own. It's shit and he knows it is. It's designed to keep the riffraff away, the drones from messaging and the ne'er-do-wells from wanting to touch my botty. The proper worded profile is, of course, rather betterly written. " Can't really advise someone who is good at advice | |||
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" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx " I would lose the part about not looking for single men - you've already stated what you're looking for, little point reiterating it. Lose the 'if we're not what you are looking for' - you know if you're not. You can put some of the sentences together to make it sound more appealing and less appealing - an example would be 'We love the excitement of going to clubs and meeting new people whilst exploring Kat's bi side.' I could rewrite it but then I think your voice would be lost and it might not be you as such. I'd lose the no black or asian thing but meh. | |||
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" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx " If you're not looking for single guys just use your filters rather than saying it. Gives you more opportunity to say what you are looking for than what you're not. | |||
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" I would lose the part about not looking for single men - you've already stated what you're looking for, little point reiterating it. Lose the 'if we're not what you are looking for' - you know if you're not. You can put some of the sentences together to make it sound more appealing and less appealing - an example would be 'We love the excitement of going to clubs and meeting new people whilst exploring Kat's bi side.' I could rewrite it but then I think your voice would be lost and it might not be you as such. I'd lose the no black or asian thing but meh. " Good profile, maybe add your avatar to your picture list? I think you'd find that it would be a popular one. | |||
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" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx I would lose the part about not looking for single men - you've already stated what you're looking for, little point reiterating it. Lose the 'if we're not what you are looking for' - you know if you're not. You can put some of the sentences together to make it sound more appealing and less appealing - an example would be 'We love the excitement of going to clubs and meeting new people whilst exploring Kat's bi side.' I could rewrite it but then I think your voice would be lost and it might not be you as such. I'd lose the no black or asian thing but meh. " Thanks for your advice will get together and do a re write tomorrow xx | |||
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" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx If you're not looking for single guys just use your filters rather than saying it. Gives you more opportunity to say what you are looking for than what you're not. " Thank you xx | |||
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" Good profile, maybe add your avatar to your picture list? I think you'd find that it would be a popular one." I thought so too. I actually received the most abuse about my figure with that one so decided to just keep it as an avatar. | |||
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" Can't really advise someone who is good at advice" I'd consider losing the last line, it already says you don't accommodate higher up in your profile. | |||
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" Good profile, maybe add your avatar to your picture list? I think you'd find that it would be a popular one. I thought so too. I actually received the most abuse about my figure with that one so decided to just keep it as an avatar." I think your profile is good as it is. Leaves lots to the imagination | |||
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" I think your profile is good as it is. Leaves lots to the imagination" Maybe consider rewriting the 'few basic rules' section? It sort of ends things on a bit of a downer or negative. | |||
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"Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!! "brief but says ecactly why shes here | |||
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"Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!! "Thanks you! And have been trying to shorten it but not sure what to lose | |||
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"Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!! brief but says ecactly why shes here"Yet lads still don't read it | |||
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"....brief but says ecactly why shes here" Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line. It invites a negative perception. | |||
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"....brief but says ecactly why shes here Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line. It invites a negative perception. " Can't get past his pictures | |||
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"....brief but says ecactly why shes here Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line. It invites a negative perception. Can't get past his pictures "Looks good to me. | |||
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"....brief but says ecactly why shes here Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line. It invites a negative perception. Can't get past his pictures
Looks good to me. "Oh my gawd.....its him Profile advice for the profile adviser? Ok then.....there's not much text which I guess you've done for a reason but it makes me think you might be a bit of a lazy, and we don't want that in the bedroom, do we?? | |||
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"Lady Lick - your profile could perhaps be shortened a bit. However, it says what needs to be said and the pics are excellent." Maybe a few more pics in the public gallery xx | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though "Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there  hope it's a bit better now | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though
Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now "Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though
Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now
Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give "Great profile though I'd change location to east mids | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though
Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now
Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give "Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though
Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now
Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give
Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx"Maybe some more pics of Mr apart from that a very nice profile | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though
Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now
Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give
Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx
Maybe some more pics of Mr apart from that a very nice profile "Haha yes! I'll need to play paparazzi with mr tho - he doesn't like posing xx | |||
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Perhaps a little more about your personalities, but thats not advice im giving with much conviction. More for title of the thread ha | |||
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"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though
Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now
Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give
Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx
Maybe some more pics of Mr apart from that a very nice profile
Haha yes! I'll need to play paparazzi with mr tho - he doesn't like posing xx"Got to give the ladies a sample of your good man | |||
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"Jammyc... Bio tells quite a bit which is fine but maybe a little variation in the pictures " Love a man in a suit vert dapper and....where was i? Drool city mm x | |||
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"Jammyc... Bio tells quite a bit which is fine but maybe a little variation in the pictures Love a man in a suit vert dapper and....where was i? Drool city mm x" Great profile and photos - can't think of any improvement | |||
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"Chipper... Need more on the bio, you've stated you're single 3 times Black magic.... Good evening "Short but sweet. I like it. | |||
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"Passion a really fitting username. A glowing profile" Ah got you before, same as previous | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon " Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. " Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha
I could go on probs should save it for the meets | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha
I could go on probs should save it for the meets "Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long. | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha
I could go on probs should save it for the meets
Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long."Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye. Profile is honest. | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha
I could go on probs should save it for the meets
Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.
Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.
Profile is honest. "Honest and to the point, some great pics too x | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha
I could go on probs should save it for the meets
Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.
Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.
Profile is honest.
Honest and to the point, some great pics too x"Waxing lyrical, A joy to read but then I had great hopes from the outset.. Good pics, only a few but then less is more... Seems all inclusive and even your negatives(dislikes, etc) were written in a shit sandwich style and ended on a positive.. Cannot fault it at all.. | |||
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"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha
I could go on probs should save it for the meets
Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.
Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.
Profile is honest.
Honest and to the point, some great pics too x
Waxing lyrical,
A joy to read but then I had great hopes from the outset..
Good pics, only a few but then less is more...
Seems all inclusive and even your negatives(dislikes, etc) were written in a shit sandwich style and ended on a positive..
Cannot fault it at all.."Fun pics and a fun profile. A refreshing change | |||
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"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio "Lol. You do realise that's just part of my very professional legal warning to Sydney uni? | |||
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"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio
Lol. You do realise that's just part of my very professional legal warning to Sydney uni? "I didn't
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"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio "My advice is, why haven't you contacted us yet  | |||
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"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio
Lol. You do realise that's just part of my very professional legal warning to Sydney uni?
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Well in that case it's great "I'll amen it so it's not confuffilating | |||
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"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio
My advice is, why haven't you contacted us yet "Nice profile but it would be nice to see a few whole body pics | |||
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"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio
My advice is, why haven't you contacted us yet
Nice profile but it would be nice to see a few whole body pics "Can't you print me off and put me together like a jigsaw
Fair comment. And we need some of Sir too
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"Seems fine to me without my help "I suspect the messages off guys you mention may be because you show several pics of your bum. | |||
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"Reminds me; need more pics of my bum "Says what you dont want but not enough of what you do want x | |||
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"Nice profile.just lose the dick pics "Really. The are very subtle ones | |||
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"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes "on Passion8 | |||
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"Nice profile.just lose the dick pics
Really. The are very subtle ones "Pretty good no need for any help | |||
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"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8 "No dick pics? rude | |||
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"Reminds me; need more pics of my bum
Says what you dont want but not enough of what you do want x"More pics please. You don't need anymore profile text cos you're a lady but it would be icing on the cake. | |||
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"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8
No dick pics? rude "I only send them t' people who ask open mouthed. | |||
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"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8
No dick pics? rude
I only send them t' people who ask open mouthed. "(Open mouth emoji) | |||
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"I'd get a couple of public photos. All good other than that. " Lol JUST made em private | |||
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"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8 "I have a blonde bob. | |||
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"Passion8 I wouldn't change a thing x" Great profile but could do with more rear shots to pervy if you've got it show it off  | |||
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"not bad seem honest and humble and to the point, solid 8. maybe a few arty pics needed" It's a good honest profile, just that the reference to the nick cave song is damned scary... | |||
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"not bad seem honest and humble and to the point, solid 8. maybe a few arty pics needed It's a good honest profile, just that the reference to the nick cave song is damned scary..." Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive | |||
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" Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive "Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8 | |||
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" Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive
Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8"It's a good profile | |||
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" Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive
Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8
It's a good profile "Good photos, clear text, excellent veris. No advice really | |||
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" Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive
Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8
It's a good profile
Good photos, clear text, excellent veris. No advice really "An excellent profile, well written and great pictures. Maybe the text is a little over long but I'm being picky | |||
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" Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive
Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8
It's a good profile
Good photos, clear text, excellent veris. No advice really
An excellent profile, well written and great pictures. Maybe the text is a little over long but I'm being picky "So am I
But I know what you mean, I've tried to distill it as much as poss x | |||
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"All looks good to me." More pics please | |||
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"Does what it says on the tin i suppose lol" I'd drop the "at some point I'll improve this profile" Makes people think you are not serious. Ie they will come back when it's ready. | |||
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Get a move on 
Just be grateful for any message without asking for a face pic | |||
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"Id say its a bit thin but you kinda cover that off. My experience women want more not lesss though...Not sure though. I'm not the best fabber in the world lol" I actually think you have a great profile. You're missing the "o" in the word "to" in your last sentence. Other than that, I really like it. | |||
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"Passion8 I wouldn't change a thing x" Aw. Thank you xxx | |||
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" I actually think you have a great profile. You're missing the "o" in the word "to" in your last sentence. Other than that, I really like it. "Oh thanks, I'm never sure how good mine is. Sseems a tad silly sometimes. Thanks for the spell check to, hadnt seen that! | |||
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"Oh yous have great pics Not much yous could improve " You are a sweetie | |||
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" You are a sweetie " Nice profile. If anything a little far away from us! | |||
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" You are a sweetie Nice profile. If anything a little far away from us! "Ok profile, could do with a bit more details 5 | |||
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" You are a sweetie Nice profile. If anything a little far away from us!
Ok profile, could do with a bit more details 5"Ok profile, could do with more pics using soap in the shower and less underwear hahah | |||
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"Miss Innocent -good profile, lots of pics, clear pics so people know exactly what you look like. Profile text is unambiguous - very clear what you're like and what you're looking for. Solid 9 out of 10. The OP asks for advice to improve - hmmm toughie! Maybe your username? I can't believe you're *that* innocent!! "Great profile...lays out everything you need to know about DanBerks in one neat package. Good selection of interesting and humourous pics too. Single guys looking for profile advice would do well to read this one and take some tips from it. Gets a 10/10 from me. | |||
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"Some lovely photos . But profile went on a little but think the photos will catch peoples eye Xxxx" Pics are all about those unusual pants and your penis. Too much of that I think. I don't really get an impression of 'you' from your spiel. | |||
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"It makes for interesting times in the toilet "Oh Steve, you know all you gotta do is ask | |||
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"Maybe just remove the Not meeting that often but apart from that good profile" But I don't meet very often!!! | |||
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"This is the part where I ask to be roasted then I guess... no jokes please "You have a cock pic and a face pic and say that you hve in your profile. You could say something else instead. | |||
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"This is the part where I ask to be roasted then I guess... no jokes please
You have a cock pic and a face pic and say that you hve in your profile. You could say something else instead. "Bring back the abs | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! " seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time." Pauly, great pics, great profile | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time." Fell asleep at 'slim'  | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. Pauly, great pics, great profile "I like it | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. Fell asleep at 'slim' "do you sleep on your front? | |||
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"Can I just say that my current profile wording is actually designed NOT to attract anyone? I have a proper wording for those who are interested. " uses promises of wine and haribos to get laid.... for shame | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. Fell asleep at 'slim'
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. Fell asleep at 'slim'
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Only on the beach "My only criticism is that you could do with a bigger bag of haribo's! | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. Fell asleep at 'slim'
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Only on the beach
My only criticism is that you could do with a bigger bag of haribo's!"Good blurb that explains clearly what the profile is used for and good selection of pics - nothing else needed | |||
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"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time. Fell asleep at 'slim'
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Only on the beach
My only criticism is that you could do with a bigger bag of haribo's!
Good blurb that explains clearly what the profile is used for and good selection of pics - nothing else needed "Well written, if a little long. | |||
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"More leg pics Kinky "It's a bit bossy but I'm assuming that's a product of the master/slave scenario. I always think the harsher the master, the more gentle the profile simply to really get into people's heads. | |||
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"More leg pics Kinky
It's a bit bossy but I'm assuming that's a product of the master/slave scenario. I always think the harsher the master, the more gentle the profile simply to really get into people's heads. "Seems fine, decent pics, honest and to the point, Well done sir | |||
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"Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x"You're clear about what you're looking for which is good. The Legal Notice is a complete waste of space on your profile. | |||
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"Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x
You're clear about what you're looking for which is good.
The Legal Notice is a complete waste of space on your profile."Great profile. So much better now there's more variety in your style of pics.
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"Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x
You're clear about what you're looking for which is good.
The Legal Notice is a complete waste of space on your profile.
Great profile. So much better now there's more variety in your style of pics.
Reminds me; I need to pen a new Sydney paragraph "Says exactly what it needs to say, with a nice wink to Sydney. | |||
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"Mr shep No advice.needed. Decent profile. Mr" Cant find a thing wrong with it. So my advice is Keep up the good work | |||
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"Mr shep No advice.needed. Decent profile. Mr Cant find a thing wrong with it. So my advice is Keep up the good work "Cracking | |||
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" Cant find a thing wrong with it. So my advice is Keep up the good work "Nor me with yours. Good photos of both of you, meet parameters set in profile, not pushy. Good profile! | |||
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" Cant find a thing wrong with it. So my advice is Keep up the good work
Nor me with yours. Good photos of both of you, meet parameters set in profile, not pushy.
Good profile!"Might want to reconsider your username seeing as you're straight. Just sayin | |||
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" Cant find a thing wrong with it. So my advice is Keep up the good work
Nor me with yours. Good photos of both of you, meet parameters set in profile, not pushy.
Good profile!
Might want to reconsider your username seeing as you're straight.
Just sayin "Lol straights eh!? | |||
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"Arty pics; needs more meets and better meat" I can't improve my meat! | |||
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