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By *nonandy OP Man
over a year ago
Near Glasgow |
Seen many a post over the years from newbies asking for advice on why their profile doesn't get attention or what they should put to get more replies and was thinking this might be a fun thread. Give one Critique off the profile above
ie the profile above aka me really needs to update their blurb, first line says 32 single straight etc turned 34 not so long ago, didn't think it had been that long since I updated  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The only thing I'd change on yours is the mention of covid. That was 5 years ago now.
The rest is fine. Maybe another public pic or 2. That's it.  |
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"The only thing I'd change on yours is the mention of covid. That was 5 years ago now.
The rest is fine. Maybe another public pic or 2. That's it. "
Well written you come across as a nice person we have spoke a while ago about something can't even remember what😂 and a pice photo  |
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"Seen many a post over the years from newbies asking for advice on why their profile doesn't get attention or what they should put to get more replies and was thinking this might be a fun thread. Give one Critique off the profile above
ie the profile above aka me really needs to update their blurb, first line says 32 single straight etc turned 34 not so long ago, didn't think it had been that long since I updated "
As the lady above mentioned covid was almost 6 yrs ago now .
Also as you mentioned your 34 not 32 .
I'd also put on more recent photos than the ones you have.
The toy collection part of the profile might also not appeal because not all women would be willing to play using toys that have been used on many others with no idea if the toys are being cleaned properly. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hard to critique, she has clear points on who she is, what shes looking for etc plenty vids & pics erm its a pretty good profile |
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By *iona38ddTV/TS
over a year ago
north east fife |
"Hard to critique, she has clear points on who she is, what shes looking for etc plenty vids & pics erm its a pretty good profile"
You have been on 5 weeks and filled in no details |
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By *nonandy OP Man
over a year ago
Near Glasgow |
All good points
I'd say all three profiles above are quite good, I like the spacing of the sentences so much better/easier to read than one big block of text
Pheobe mentioning your tattoos is good provides for a conversation starter ie guys can ask what they are x
Juicy one point it says
Not looking for single guys. Men Women aged 27 to 46 only. Will meet smokers.
It looks like you've ticked both boxes men and no single guys, easily done x
MissDynamite excellent photos
I believe we met many moons ago at a mutual friends party |
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More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx "
Not my cup of tea...
However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want  |
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By *eetootsWoman
over a year ago
Glasgow |
"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx
Not my cup of tea...
However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want "
Great profile, you say exactlywhat your looking for and also have a good variety of pics and vids 😀 |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Nice pics and clear on who you are and what you want |
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More pictures would help I think xx |
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By *avie65Man
over a year ago
In the west. |
Maybe some more clothed photos and less of your boabie and bum |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Decent selection of pictures and a humorous bio, maybe a bit more of what you're after but that's just nit-pickibg a little. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Good profile, clear and plenty of pics and vids! No complaints- happy fabbing |
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Could add some more pics. Ones in a nice shirt/jacket combo, as the ladies keep asking for. Though, I suppose I should follow my own advice. |
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"Could add some more pics. Ones in a nice shirt/jacket combo, as the ladies keep asking for. Though, I suppose I should follow my own advice. "
Good profile with a good amount of info in the blurb although the two sentences on couples contradict each other slightly. Would remove part about needing to arrange a carer and just do that quietly in the background as may make some not engage incase they put you out. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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An outstanding profile
Very descriptive in what they offer what they seek and plenty about themselves
Spent a lot of effort on it, clearly serious players.
Discreet enough but a well written profile likeba good novel leaving you wanting more…. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me |
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"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me "
Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me
Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics. "
Love the profile. Clear and straight to the point with lots of pics and vids to see.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Thank you very much.
I will take your advice and adjust accordingly.
J |
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By *ireman28Man
over a year ago
Nottingham Leicestershire |
Certainly needs more photos. |
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More pics, the ladies will want to know more. |
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I agree with what some of the others have said, delete about Covid, add some new pics in public gallery, and the toys bit, yeah its a personal thing, a lot of ppl prefer their own toys etc... keep the bit about CJs coz lots of us go there Do you cam chat in the rooms? Its a good way to meet ppl and get veri's. Maybe put a little of what you like/dont like? xx |
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Hot profile 🔥
Good info in bio and a selection of photos and videos to whet the appetite.
The beach video (PDI ?) is stunning xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hot profile 🔥
Good info in bio and a selection of photos and videos to whet the appetite.
The beach video (PDI ?) is stunning xx"
Nicely written profile, explains everything you are looking for. Others say need more public photos but you explain discretion so only one photo explaining can supply more for possible meet scenario.
Nicely spread out paragraphs make reading easy too and.
Would we ask for a potential social, possibly as the profile ticked all the boxes we would look for. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. "
Thanks, trip to Spain 2 weeks time should resolve that issue. |
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. "
Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx |
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected.
Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx "
Great profile - can't really fault it. Definitely the kind of profile that would interest us xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You are two stunners   |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"You are two stunners "
Maybe a couple different type of pic. Not too much to change. |
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By *avie65Man
over a year ago
In the west. |
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I could only suggest more photos of Mrs J’s legs. You can never have enough photos of great legs. Oooofty. |
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Feel free to critique mine as a newbie... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Any feedback or constructive criticism is welcome |
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Well with a list of do’s and don’t that is pretty specific I hope you find the right one. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Go for it I’d love to have some advice |
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"Some more photos would good."
noted, thanks.
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"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks."
I dont think you have to change much
Your profile is quite informative
Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you
You have to educate yourself along the way
But pretty good profile
Hope your fab journey is good  |
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Good profile in terms of what your looking for etc.
Would adjust the grammar in your main body of text but that's about it.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Good profile in terms of what your looking for etc.
Would adjust the grammar in your main body of text but that's about it.
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Well put together profile and definitely someone to message. |
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"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks.
I dont think you have to change much
Your profile is quite informative
Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you
You have to educate yourself along the way
But pretty good profile
Hope your fab journey is good "
Fair point regarding education! Love your profile! Thank you |
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By *D67Man
over a year ago
glasgow |
Honest and straight to the point |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Honest and straight to the point "
Would add a bit more about yourself and add some new pics that differ from the style of those on show. |
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Hard to critique, very clear profile, gives a sense of the person. Pics are tasteful too. |
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By *nonandy OP Man
over a year ago
Near Glasgow |
Had a we update and made a few changes with the comments in mind |
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Perfectly acceptable profile
I wouldn't be showing any pre 2020 verifications. I only say that as you have more than enough since 2020, so any prior is just superfluous. |
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Good profile, brief and says what you want.
I would take off the reference to your old profiles as theyre irrelevant now
Nice photo's |
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By *illie10Man
over a year ago
Kilmarnock |
"Good profile, brief and says what you want.
I would take off the reference to your old profiles as theyre irrelevant now
Nice photo's"
Also a good profile. Well written and provides appropriate information. Nice pictures as well. |
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Need more face pics to many cock pics ideally would like
More face pics |
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"Need more face pics to many cock pics ideally would like
More face pics "
We don’t look at many single guys profiles on here but this guys is one of the better ones. He comes across as actually a nice guy, not a creep, genuine and has the perfect number of dick pics. |
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Thanks for the feedback really appreciated |
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By *ireman28Man 52 weeks ago
Nottingham Leicestershire |
Maybe a different array of photos |
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"Maybe a different array of photos"
Speaking about pics......
First pic you're not even in (well possibly your DNA is, but that's not confirmed), and you have one of you "flipping the bird" - why? Also 5 pics that are a decade old.
A small clean up and it will be grand. |
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By *eriScotMan 52 weeks ago
Scottish Borders |
Can't say i'd change anything Mr. Edible |
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By *awk3y3Man 52 weeks ago
West Lothian |
Nice aubergines - they home grown ? |
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Profile seems light-hearted and humorous. I would maybe change the wording of "the occasional boundary pushed". Just to make it clear that you're looking to broaden your own horizons and not trying to push someone else's pre-set boundaries. |
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By (user no longer on site) 52 weeks ago
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Can’t critique your profile at all. The only thing I would say, your most recent pic I'd make your profile pic. Beautiful boobs xx |
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Can’t fault your profile at all. Great selection of photos and videos and you’ve made it clear and precise what you’re looking for. |
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By (user no longer on site) 52 weeks ago
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"Can’t fault your profile at all. Great selection of photos and videos and you’ve made it clear and precise what you’re looking for. "
Thank you handsome xx |
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By (user no longer on site) 52 weeks ago
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Thank you hun xx |
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By (user no longer on site) 52 weeks ago
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Very nice profile. |
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Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 |
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By (user no longer on site) 52 weeks ago
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻"
I love your profile picture most of all |
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻
I love your profile picture most of all "
Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.
I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.
Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future  |
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By (user no longer on site) 52 weeks ago
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻
I love your profile picture most of all
Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.
I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.
Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future "
Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point.
I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into.
My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps! |
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻
I love your profile picture most of all
Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.
I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.
Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future
Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point.
I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into.
My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps! "
Noted and fixed  |
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By (user no longer on site) 51 weeks ago
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Sounds like GingerHefe has had some great feedback and fixed their profile accordingly - I'd love a profile roast and critique please as although I have met a few people, I am struggling to get a reply from many single ladies or couples. Help me improve my profile |
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"Sounds like GingerHefe has had some great feedback and fixed their profile accordingly - I'd love a profile roast and critique please as although I have met a few people, I am struggling to get a reply from many single ladies or couples. Help me improve my profile "
Not much to change on your profile I wouldn't say. Maybe mix up the photos a bit to have some more body pictures rather than very similar photos of your cock but that would be our only comments. |
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By (user no longer on site) 51 weeks ago
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Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x |
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"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x"
For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it.
And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile.
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By (user no longer on site) 51 weeks ago
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Thank you, yeah, that’s a really valid point. I’ve just added in a new photo and I’ll try to add a handful more in over the next week or so.
A few new face photos and some body shots too.
Appreciate your feedback |
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"Thank you, yeah, that’s a really valid point. I’ve just added in a new photo and I’ll try to add a handful more in over the next week or so.
A few new face photos and some body shots too.
Appreciate your feedback "
No problem x |
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By (user no longer on site) 51 weeks ago
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"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x
For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it.
And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile.
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Thanks very much |
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By *ireman28Man 50 weeks ago
Nottingham Leicestershire |
Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics"
Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 |
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By *avie65Man 50 weeks ago
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"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics
Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 "
It’s pretty black and white.
I’m sure I have seen your profile picture somewhere else before though. I fear someone may have used your photo and not told you. |
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Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx |
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"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx "
First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx
First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience "
Decent profile, informative and mix of pics. Better than a lot of mens efforts on here. |
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I can see a lot of noses put out of joint |
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Great profile. Can't fault it. |
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Another good and thorough one. Most people won't read it |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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Prob need to add a few more pics to the detailed write up. But if you’re happy with your profile,Thats the main thing. |
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"Prob need to add a few more pics to the detailed write up. But if you’re happy with your profile,Thats the main thing. "
Great profile, hot couple.
Know what they want, plenty of detail |
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Great profile
Very detailed and up to date |
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Brilliant profile. Clear and detailed |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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Clear and precise profile
Video + Pictures
Boundaries and Guidelines
Verifications. 10/10 for me! |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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Clear and simple profile.
No nonsense or waffle. Clear boundaries and expectations, great pics and hot video.
10/10. |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"Clear and simple profile.
No nonsense or waffle. Clear boundaries and expectations, great pics and hot video.
10/10. "
Just enough enticing pictures to show what you’re in for
Bio states clearly what you’re looking for and what you’re willing to be a part of, could do with some more discreet pics in my biased opinion
All in all great profile and I’m sure there’s a lot to show for it behind the scenes |
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Your profile is good but a bit too much like if ChatGpt was to write you an intro!
LOL
But yeah looks good.
Happy Fabbing ! |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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I don't think you really need reviewed. The number of positive verifications show you are legit and obviously experts in your field.
Bit confused by the multiple playmates and pictures of different women. Are you a couple with playmates or a single man with multiple women?
Your preference for dad bods is music to my cock. |
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Decent profile with good body shots, my only criticism , and I’m stretching here, would be that I like to see something that tells me about the persons. Not just their sexual desires etc but I am nit picking there |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"Decent profile with good body shots, my only criticism , and I’m stretching here, would be that I like to see something that tells me about the persons. Not just their sexual desires etc but I am nit picking there "
Got a bit of info, better than some profiles deff. But ditch most if not all of cock pics. |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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I think your profile has a solid, friendly tone and communicates honesty and experience, which are all positives.
You have a good array of photos showing off your interests and implements you like to use.
Can't see anything to change other than nitpicking grammar which isn't why any of us are here 😂 |
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By *iimonMan 50 weeks ago
Central belt Scotland |
Good profile, tell you all you need to know with out being a long book like some. Needs more public pics. |
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Can someone critique mine please I re wrote it completely |
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By *iona38ddTV/TS 50 weeks ago
north east fife |
"Can someone critique mine please I re wrote it completely "
Very clear information provided |
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Straight forward information, no ambiguity. Classic profile |
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By *uboCouple 50 weeks ago
East kilbride |
You seem to have all bases covered.
Who and what you are looking for. Nothing more needed. |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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Got it all, honest clear pictures, some discreet pics and then the teasing ones 🤤
Very clear in what you’re after and what you’re willing to turn the other way for.
Definitely one of the better ones on fab |
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By *I TwoCouple 50 weeks ago
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Good photos and profile, great verifications.
Not for us, too young but I'm sure you'll do well in fab |
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Plenty verifications, nice pics, obviously very popular. |
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well I have just read the profile above and only positive feedback from me. Concise and straight to the point. Love the pics btw. Keep em cummin |
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Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉
All good signs from me |
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Do your worst, check my profile out, ( if you dare!) |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉
All good signs from me "
Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for. |
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"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉
All good signs from me
Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for. "
Thanks, I had to spring clean the majority of my pics, I had far too much cock out on display, after all, less is more! |
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By *sWyldWoman 50 weeks ago
Edinburgh |
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By *sWyldWoman 50 weeks ago
Edinburgh |
It says what you're looking for but not what others might expect from you |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉
All good signs from me
Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for.
Thanks, I had to spring clean the majority of my pics, I had far too much cock out on display, after all, less is more! "
Id replied to the guy above you. Hadn't looked at yours. |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"It says what you're looking for but not what others might expect from you "
Very good. Lots of good pics and extensive informative bio. |
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Decent bio , good variety of pictures 👍 |
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"Super fit couple "
Maybe a bit short on the text, and the first statement is gramatically wrong. That can turn a lot of people off.
Otherwise, coming from a straight guy, looks ok. I'm sure the ladies will have more to say. |
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"Super fit couple
Maybe a bit short on the text, and the first statement is gramatically wrong. That can turn a lot of people off.
Otherwise, coming from a straight guy, looks ok. I'm sure the ladies will have more to say."
Good well written profile, clear what you are looking for and comes across as genuine. Maybe a couple more pics would help. |
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By *av007Man 50 weeks ago
Glasgow area |
Good,clear,to the point. |
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Good pics, would love to see a wee bit more text though. Maybe more about you and what you’re looking for? |
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Good clear profile maybe a few more pics and a more recent veri |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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Not what I’m looking for, but a nice straight forwards profile that says who you are and what you’re about. Decent amount of verifications (envy). Certainly a profile that fits what people are looking for. |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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Your is very descriptive of yourself which is good, my only critique would be the 1st picture posted shouldn’t be a dick pic but that’s just my personal opinion sorry lol |
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Better pictures for a start.....the whole pale white chest pictures are not a great look. And your intro is just rather generic and we lost interest in it.
Remember your profile page is your selling page! You got to stand out from the crowd. |
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By (user no longer on site) 50 weeks ago
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"How is my profile x"
written very well
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By *iimonMan 50 weeks ago
Central belt Scotland |
I would love to hear what some girls think of my profile. Any ideas for changes welcome! |
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By *ireman28Man 49 weeks ago
Nottingham Leicestershire |
An artisic array of pictures |
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Certainly an impressive piece and loads, but the profile pic as a dick pic thing isn't for me x
Written well and gets to the point. |
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Looks like u guys are lots of fun and confident..
Lovely |
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By (user no longer on site) 49 weeks ago
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Good taste in music |
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By (user no longer on site) 49 weeks ago
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A bit wordy and no pics, but other than that it's clear and covers all the basics and doesn't waffle...and doesn't have one of those stupid "Sydney University" things..so 6/10...(would be 8 but no pics!) |
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"A bit wordy and no pics, but other than that it's clear and covers all the basics and doesn't waffle...and doesn't have one of those stupid "Sydney University" things..so 6/10...(would be 8 but no pics!)"
Loved your profile just the right amount of content (would love to meet you guys) only thing I could possibly say would maybe be a couple more pics xx |
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By (user no longer on site) 49 weeks ago
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I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up |
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"I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up "
Would say it's a bit rude to not comment on the couple profile above you in the thread and instead ask for advice on your own profile. Whilst that's clearly is the theme of the thread - it's got to be quid pro quo.
Your profile statement lacks punctuation and is one very very long sentence. In that regard, it's a profile we would quickly overlook. Hope that was helpful. |
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Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves .
A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥 |
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"Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves .
A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥"
Stunning profile. What fab is all about! Great selection of very hot pics and a descriptive bio that sets out what they want. 10/10 |
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By *bostCouple 49 weeks ago
glasgow |
"Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves .
A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥
Stunning profile. What fab is all about! Great selection of very hot pics and a descriptive bio that sets out what they want. 10/10"
Wow. What a profile. Sets out exactly what they do and don’t want. Plenty of information to a paint a picture of both of them.
Photos very hot too. |
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Sbost, well the gallery has a range of photos, with the inclusion of some B&W and arty pics ..
Definitely a tease, leaving you wanting more!
They are clear on what they are looking for.
The only comment would be that there are no pics of him or them together, some people would prefer to see 1 pic of Mr or the pair.
Otherwise, I great profile! |
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By (user no longer on site) 49 weeks ago
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"I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up
Would say it's a bit rude to not comment on the couple profile above you in the thread and instead ask for advice on your own profile. Whilst that's clearly is the theme of the thread - it's got to be quid pro quo.
Your profile statement lacks punctuation and is one very very long sentence. In that regard, it's a profile we would quickly overlook. Hope that was helpful. "
To yourself I do apologise for missing the obvious,not a habit I generally have,I had thought i was up to date with posts,the bad grammar I will blame on the lack of specs at the time,another habit which isn't normal,apologies to yourselves and to the profile above profound apologies,I am scared to look now but im very sure it will be as amazing as your main picture...peace out folks |
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By *ireman28Man 48 weeks ago
Nottingham Leicestershire |
Seems like a good fella but needs a range of different photos |
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By (user no longer on site) 48 weeks ago
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Some torso pictures would be nice and lose the middle finger.
Bio is great but that many verification would put me off x |
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By (user no longer on site) 48 weeks ago
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It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles |
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By *berdonMan 48 weeks ago
Aberdeen |
"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles"
Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though |
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By (user no longer on site) 48 weeks ago
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"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles
Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though"
Good profile likes and wants outlined and straight to the point. Top work |
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By (user no longer on site) 48 weeks ago
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"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles
Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though
Good profile likes and wants outlined and straight to the point. Top work "
Not the worst but not the best. Get more creative with pics and add more bio. Take out the know how it works bit. Points for not being a blank profile though. |
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I actually think your profile is really good, but then I'm not a female looking at it
I'm not a fan of naked guys in baths but thats just a personal choice. We don't look as good as females in the bath lol.
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Clear, conscise and articulate. All plus points in my book. Bonus points for the b&w pictures which I'm a sucker for
Really excellent profile in my humble opinion |
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I would remove the opening diatribe:
""Never quite know what to write on these things!
Does anyone even bother to read them anyway? Recent evidence may suggest otherwise lol!""
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Other than that you're good to go. 🌿 |
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As profiles go we quite like this one, it's different. It's Informative, outlines exactly what you want with a good range of pictures that aren't just all of a cock. Nice |
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Well written profile, says everything you need to know. It’s clear what you’re looking for and what you’re interested in, no messing about.
Great photos, verity is amazing. A+ |
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Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now |
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By (user no longer on site) 48 weeks ago
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"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now "
"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now "
Whilst it may not stop the influx of messages from guys in your inbox, if you're not meeting then I would take out the bit about who you're looking for as it's a tad contradictory. Or, you could take out the bit to say you're not meeting, but say that you're not 'actively' meeting at the moment. You could probably expand a little bit more below that about things you like / dislike.
That said, your profile is decent and clear, sometimes less is more! I like the array of lingerie pics, but the naked photo on the bed is a cracker.
Hope that helps x |
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By (user no longer on site) 48 weeks ago
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You’ve a well written, honest and approachable profile. A good variety of pics too |
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Thanks, and your suggestions are duly noted jx |
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straight to the point profile.
no messing about.
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Straight to the point and clear on what's wanted / looking for |
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Pretty clear profile. To the point about what you like and what you're looking for.
Good pictures but I'd say putting the m as the profile pic when he's looking to watch could be changed is all, but not a big deal! |
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Clear and to the point what you see is what you get |
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"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now "
I will make the appropriate changes and extend my sincerest thank you for your honest and constructive feedback |
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Would like to know what I can do with mine |
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Amazing beard and tattoos. Love the bear look |
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profile leaves men in no doubt what you are interested and not interested in. absolutely no ambiguity lol. nice pic too x |
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By (user no longer on site) 47 weeks ago
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Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail |
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By *exsaCouple 47 weeks ago
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"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail "
Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics |
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"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail
Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics "
Well written, concise and hot photos! |
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By (user no longer on site) 47 weeks ago
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Very well written,no bullshit,just clear and pretty much to the point,good humour in there also which I like to see |
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By *exsaCouple 47 weeks ago
Dunfermline |
"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail
Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics
Well written, concise and hot photos!"
Why thank you |
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