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By *adbod2015 OP   Man 38 weeks ago

Nantwich

Hey,

Sort of how the titles suggests but I was wondering, do people enjoy the stories with the longer slower build up to the naughty stuff or do they prefer the ones that pretty much just get straight down to business?

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By *iv JonesMan 38 weeks ago

cardiff

Straight down to business

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By *oleraine-coupleCouple 38 weeks ago

Coleraine

I have always assumed in writing my stories people want it to flow rather than endlessly stop starting so I write most of them as full sections.

I would imagine it helps if you want to read and wank.

Here is one example

Part 1

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1709541

Part 2

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1710160

Part 3

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1710607

Part 4

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1711462

Part 5

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1712330

Part 6

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1714027

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By *eterinpantiesukMan 38 weeks ago

southam


"Hey,

Sort of how the titles suggests but I was wondering, do people enjoy the stories with the longer slower build up to the naughty stuff or do they prefer the ones that pretty much just get straight down to business?"

plenty of tease and slow build up and hesitaancy

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By *cottish guy 555Man 38 weeks ago

London

I prefer well written and a slow build. The expanding of the narrative and setting is always better. Coleraine couple and Mr eagle are excellent purveyors of this style.

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By *ancmannMan 38 weeks ago

manchester / Liverpool

I’ve been wondering this, I’ve put a series of stories up and each part is pretty long, mainly because I get frustrated when I’m reading them an there’s only a few lines the you have to wait for the next bit ……. But I do wonder if people get a bit bored with the longer stories and prefer the quick ones

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By *cottish guy 555Man 38 weeks ago

London


"I’ve been wondering this, I’ve put a series of stories up and each part is pretty long, mainly because I get frustrated when I’m reading them an there’s only a few lines the you have to wait for the next bit ……. But I do wonder if people get a bit bored with the longer stories and prefer the quick ones"

Indeed. My latest true tale has been relatively ignored. Not that I'm fussed. I know the ladies I'm writing it for are enjoying it.

It's just finding the time to keep adding to it.

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By *erkswankerMan 38 weeks ago

Berkshire

If it is a good story then there's no harm taking the time to build it up. The main thing for me is use some bloody punctuation, even the shortest story is ruined by people who have never heard of commas and full stops haha.

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By *atandasmileMan 38 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"If it is a good story then there's no harm taking the time to build it up. The main thing for me is use some bloody punctuation, even the shortest story is ruined by people who have never heard of commas and full stops haha."

Suddenly I feel like doing doing a Mark Twain:

.,;,:,,,...-.;:..-.,,,

Sprinkle those around as you see fit.

Mostly I don't mind too much, though I try to properly punctuate my own. I do agree that it can get to the point where lack of punctuation makes a story difficult to read, though, and that's the point at which a story becomes less enjoyable or I give up.

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By *aughtyintownMan 38 weeks ago

Newport

So if someone has taken the trouble to share then thanks I'll go with what they write.

We all have lives outside fab so we can't just drop everything any minute just to write it all in one go

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By (user no longer on site) 38 weeks ago

They used to arrive together.

Same hallway. Same morning coffee. That quiet energy between them that only people pretending to be fine carry.

Not today.

Today she passed me in the corridor, alone — faster pace, tighter jaw. I caught the look in her eyes. Fury held together by office etiquette. The kind of storm that doesn’t cry — it simmers.

He didn’t show up to the meeting. Didn’t show up to much lately, really. But she stayed. Composed. Efficient. On the surface.

By 5:07 p.m., the building was nearly empty. Just the two of us and a couple of cleaners. I watched her linger at her desk — not working. Just thinking too loud.

She didn’t notice me until I stopped at her door.

“You done pretending?”

Her eyes flicked to mine — sharp and tired. No defenses left.

“Come with me.”

No argument. No words. Just the scrape of her chair as she stood and followed.

We passed quiet offices and darkened doorways. She didn’t ask where we were going. I didn’t explain. She knew.

His office was unlocked. Sloppy. Just like him.

I opened the door. She paused, staring at the nameplate, then stepped inside. I watched her eyes scan the desk, the framed photo of them still sitting next to the monitor.

“I don’t want to talk about him,” she said, her voice rough around the edges.

“I don’t want you to,” I replied. “I want you to reclaim the space he thought he owned.”

I stepped behind her, slowly wrapping my fingers around her waist.

“You’ve been holding it all in. The anger. The grief. The need.”

She inhaled. Shallow. Sharp.

My voice dropped.

“Let me take it.”

Her body softened.

“Turn around. Hands on the desk.”

She obeyed. No hesitation.

“This isn’t for love,” I said as I traced the curve of her lower back. “It’s for every time he made you feel unseen. For every time you begged in silence.”

She was trembling now — not in fear, but release.

“He used this desk to act like a man,” I said quietly, leaning in. “Tonight it will remind him who actually is one.”

Her moan was low and helpless as I pressed her down flat.

Slow. Hard. Not rushed. Every movement deliberate. She gasped, then whimpered, then surrendered completely — her body remembering what it meant to be taken, not tolerated.

“Say it,” I whispered against her ear.

“I’m not his anymore,” she said.

“No,” I growled, pulling her back into me. “You’re not. You’re mine… for as long as I decide.”

And the photo of them on his desk?

Facedown.

I gripped her skirt. Jerked it up and over her hips, exposing her thighs. Her skin was flushed, breath coming in ragged gasps. I could feel the damp heat of her cunt, her body ready, her need palpable.

"Tonight, I decide when you come,” I growled. “I decide how hard, how fast. You're mine to command."

I slipped my hand between her legs. My fingers found her slick folds, dripping and ready. She gasped as I began to tease, my touch firm and deliberate. She pushed back against me, trying to increase the pressure, but I controlled the rhythm, keeping her on edge.

"I want you to beg for it," I whispered, my lips brushing against her ear. "I want you to beg for my cock. Beg for me to fuck you like he never could."

She whimpered, her body trembling with frustration. "Please," she gasped, her hips moving in desperate circles, trying to find release. "I need it. I need you."

"Not yet." My voice was firm. I circled her clit, my touch just firm enough to make her gasp, but not enough to push her over the edge. Her breath hitched, her body tensing as she tried to chase the sensation. I pulled my hand away, leaving her panting and needy.

"Please," she begged, her voice raw with desperation. "I need more. I need you inside me. I need your cock."

I smiled, my hand coming down hard on her ass, the sound echoing in the room. She gasped, her body arching into the touch. I did it again, the sting mixing with the pleasure, driving her wild. She was begging now, her words a desperate plea, her body writhing against mine.

I slipped a finger inside her, just enough to tease, then pulled it out, leaving her empty and aching. She cried out, her body trembling with the need for more. I could feel her desperation, her body begging for release.

"I need your cock," she moaned, her voice a mix of desperation and lust. "I need you to fuck me. Please, just let me come. Let me come all over you."

I leaned over her — my body pressing against hers. "Is that what you want?" I growled, my voice low and dangerous.

"Yes," she gasped, her body pushing back against mine. "Yes, I want that. I need that. I need you to use this body for your pleasure. To claim me like he never did."

I gripped her hips, positioning myself at her entrance. She was dripping, her body ready and desperate. I teased her, rubbing the head of my cock against her slick folds, coating myself in her juices.

"Please," she begged, her voice a whimper. "Please, just fuck me. I can't take it anymore. I need to feel you inside me."

I thrust into her, hard and deep, feeling her body yield to mine. The sensation was electric, her tightness enveloping me, her wetness coating my cock. I groaned, the sound raw and primal, as I began to move, my hips slapping against her ass with each brutal thrust. The desk shook, the glass top rattling with the force of our bodies colliding. Her cries filled the room, each one a symphony of lust and release.

We both watched as he arrived in the morning. He paused at his door, taking in the sight of the marked-up desk.

His face went pale, then flushed with realization. Our juices mingled on the glass, a stark reminder of the night before. He looked at us, then back at the desk.

He knew exactly what happened. And he knew he was never reclaiming his throne.

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By *ay h500Man 38 weeks ago

mansfield

So long as the stories are coherent I enjoy the one's i enjoy. Punctuation be damned..

My written English may not be great and I write mid sized installments.

They are a mix of fantasy and reality from people and experiences over the last 20 years. I hope they are liked by some.

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By *oleraine-coupleCouple 38 weeks ago

Coleraine


"I prefer well written and a slow build. The expanding of the narrative and setting is always better. Coleraine couple and Mr eagle are excellent purveyors of this style.

"

Thank you very much

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By *cottish guy 555Man 38 weeks ago

London


"I prefer well written and a slow build. The expanding of the narrative and setting is always better. Coleraine couple and Mr eagle are excellent purveyors of this style.

Thank you very much "

My pleasure. Credit where it's due.

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