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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago
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"Can someone look into my profile and tell me what’s wrong as I can’t get responses on fab.. "
You need a photo rather than a silhouette for starters. Some of your wording is a bit strange and not easy to understand. For example you want to attend "gatherings with women of all ages" Not sure what you have in mind.
The last third of your text can be deleted as its meaningless and unnecessary.
But I have seen much worse.  |
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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago
Stoke area |
"Don’t want to clog the forum with similar posts. So if anyone could give me some pointers that would be great.  "
Probably best to start your own post, rather than hijack someone else's. If people give comments, they won't know which of you it's about.
I will say you have a good profile, that gives plenty of information about what you are about. Could do with an age range as the idea you will actually meet people in their 90s is off putting. Maybe add a few more photos for variety. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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""This type of work"
"Additional booking options"
Sounds like you expect to be paid for your company"
I thought that or he is confusing swinging with adult porn work maybe?
I guess that can happen when fantasies run on overload in the brain and you type up a profile before post but clarity.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Thanks  will update!"
I think people are refering to the Original Poster as this is his feedback thread.
You need to start your own thread to get feedback specific to your profile. It's really bad form to jump on somebody else's thread for feedback and just causes confusion.
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Silhouette instead of a profile picture often means straight to deleted without reading either the message or the profile.
Profile itself isn't the worst. Wording is squiffy though. The disclaimer at the end is pointless. You do make it sound like work. |
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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago
Stoke area |
"Guys I have taken your advice and edited the profile.
Is the profile better?"
Definitely improved in that you have a profile picture and have removed the meaningless warning section.
Do you mean you would like to go to organised socials or parties ? I am still puzzled by the use of the word gatherings and I can't picture any groups of ladies being somewhere waiting for your company. However, it's your profile and it's good to see you have taken advise on board. |
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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago
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"Guys I have taken your advice and edited the profile.
Is the profile better?
You say you are both 33 and 34. You want to meet women 18-50 and 19-55. Can't you see it is a bit confusing ?"
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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago
Stoke area |
"Would love some feedback on mine if anyone is around to help "
Best to start your own post. It's already confusing having two gents getting feedback on this one thread. Start a new post as it's bad form and confusing hijacking an existing one. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Can someone look into my profile and tell me what’s wrong as I can’t get responses on fab.. "
Simplify the language in your bio, and add some more pics.
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I find your bio really confusing and strangely worded.
You talk about meaningful connections but your status is about wanting to organise yourself a birthday gangbang and needing help to do it. Seems a bit of a disconnect there, also touching on a bit desperate.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi members,
Thank you for giving tips on improving the profile. I have again taken the advice improved your feedback will be much appreciated.
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