Just posting this a invitation to all to come on and look at my profile , for any spelling mistakes , out of place information layout etc ,etc .. I do this because I understand that profile page needs be pleasing for most people and would like a group or overall view of things to improve on and things to time down...... I know I cant make everyone happy but I do like believe more brains are better than one and welcome all suggested improvements . |
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It seems fine to me. If I was obliged to make a criticism it would be that it's rather unfriendly to immediately say that you have a long block list. It didn't make me feel special it just made me shrug my shoulders and go into the rest of your profile with a bit of a negative attitude. |
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Run your profile text via Word to pick up any spelling mistakes, or grammatical errors, there are a few.
We'd reiterate that your opening line is off putting to us, but if you're happy with it that's all that matters. |
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"It seems fine to me. If I was obliged to make a criticism it would be that it's rather unfriendly to immediately say that you have a long block list. It didn't make me feel special it just made me shrug my shoulders and go into the rest of your profile with a bit of a negative attitude. "
Thank you for the comment |
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"Kisses at the end of most sentences and the 420 bit would put me of if I were meeting.
Also you need to do a quick spell check on one of your first sentences. "
Xx are because a female wrote it for me and I'm sorry about 420 we all have our vices i understand some will be OK with it others will not but not going go into the debate on regulated and unregulated vices |
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"First sentence, dom and 420 all off putting.
Asking about spelling errors and there's one in the first line, did you actually check it yourself? "
Yes I actually did but how people read is different too some consider capital words or bold in some sentences hard to read etc etc I like to get feedback as I dno how I come off to others and always like ask for outsider opinion if all I have to worry about is my smoking I think I'm ok |
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"First sentence, dom and 420 all off putting.
Asking about spelling errors and there's one in the first line, did you actually check it yourself? "
To make clear I'm only dominant with parters who wish that to be case safe sex only and safety words are always used |
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"Hopefully I can jump on the bandwagon here and get some advice about mine. I’m gonna read yours to get some
Ideas as people seem to have responded well to what you’ve done. "
Not great etiquette to jump on another users post asking for profile advice
Better to start your own thread |
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