Hi all,
I’m looking for some honest critique and constructive feedback on my profile description. I’ve recently updated it after a long, long time and would welcome some outside perspective on how it comes across.
Cheers ✌🏽
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I feel like I’ve read a lot and have learnt very little about you.
Way too generic for my tastes; in this game you need to use your ‘shop window’ to sell yourself and stand out in a sea of twelvety thousand beige profiles that are either blank or AI-written nothingness. |
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"I’m looking for some honest critique and constructive feedback on my profile description. I’ve recently updated it after a long, long time and would welcome some outside perspective on how it comes across."
Some serious cropping required, both in the pics and the text. |
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"It reads very much like it’s AI-generated - try actually writing it yourself in your own words. Personally I’d rather read something genuine "
This for me. It screams AI. When I read a profile, I want to get a sense of the person behind it. This is generic churned-out AI waffle that is becoming far too common here |
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"Hi all,
I’m looking for some honest critique and constructive feedback on my profile description. I’ve recently updated it after a long, long time and would welcome some outside perspective on how it comes across.
Cheers ✌🏽
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It's just a lot of words that say nothing |
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It reads as not written by an actual human.
There's no personality, there's nothing actually there to connect with.
Just a sea of buzzwords, a thousand trios because trios are the best, those slight challenges that the algorithm is convinced are appealing and not just tedious red flags to actual humans.
There's nothing there that would make me want to reach out. Unless I felt like talking to a blank slate that was willing to be whatever it thought I wanted 💜 |
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