Hi everyone, I recently joined and trying to get my bio right. I know I haven't uploaded pictures yet but could someone give me some honest feedback on whether my description is well balanced? I'd rather know now if its too long or too intense. Thanks in advance! |
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"I would advise to format the text layout to make it easier to read, but content is fine for what you're looking for."
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I would agree but, without doing a disservice to the OP's rhetoric, the narrative looks/comes across as AI generated. |
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It's important that it's you that it reflects and portrays, so if it does, then you can be happy. It's intriguing and doesn't give much away. Your photos will be the thing that people will need, to assess potential attraction.
Perhaps paragraphs could break it up, to make it easier to read |
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By *lue NarwhalMan 4 days ago
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Over the years, I have found that what is written in the profile isn't as important as portraying the real you and standing out..
I have written mine as a parody to inject some humour, it may put some off but then we probably wouldn't be compatible anyway..
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