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"Hey all, So I’m throwing myself at your mercy and request input on my profile. Any thoughts on how to make it better? Anything to change? Keen to hear thoughts. 😊" It's a good profile with a variety of photos and interesting text, so people reading get a clear indication of what you are like. The only thing I would change is updating your age. You are 36 in one part and 37 in another. I was unsure about the paragraph about your quiet confidence, it could appear that you are full of your own importance, but it will appeal to some people, far more than a shy and inexperienced person, so I dont think you should change it, if it represents you well. | |||
"Hey all, So I’m throwing myself at your mercy and request input on my profile. Any thoughts on how to make it better? Anything to change? Keen to hear thoughts. 😊 It's a good profile with a variety of photos and interesting text, so people reading get a clear indication of what you are like. The only thing I would change is updating your age. You are 36 in one part and 37 in another. I was unsure about the paragraph about your quiet confidence, it could appear that you are full of your own importance, but it will appeal to some people, far more than a shy and inexperienced person, so I dont think you should change it, if it represents you well. " It could, perhaps, be re-worded I think (the part about quiet confidence), but thank you! There’s some bits I’ve clearly missed.  | |||
