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By *rco OP Man 7 days ago
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Hi everyone I’ve been on fab for about a months now and just now made a proper bio anyone feeling nice and generous that could take a peak and let me know if it’s alright and appealing to my target audience. Thanks |
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By *oldmilkMan 7 days ago
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I don’t think you need the blurb about how much TV you watch - don’t think anyone will be proactive in asking you about that.
You probably don’t need the last paragraph saying “if you like this profile, contact me” because that’s kind of the point of profiles anyway. |
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It's a reading issue for me
Large blocks of writing I really struggle with and I know I'm not the only one
I'd make some breaks in the first block for easier reading
Maybe rework some of the tv bit, and you'll find people with the same interests and make that part of your messages? |
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OP, you are 21, and you have only been here 5 weeks! That's nothing in Fab time, plus there aren't that many people on here who are looking for such young guys, regardless of how much maturity you show.
Your bio is a bit confusing in places, for example you state you're naturally dominant but want to experience being tied up. Maybe I'm just not reading it right.
Anyway, my advice - stop concentrating on Fab only, get yourself into the real world, where people your age meet. You're too young for some swingers clubs, but probably not too young for organised socials. |
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By *rco OP Man 7 days ago
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Thanks for the advice I said I’m mainly dominant not naturally. But also said I love a switch but I do agree about real world but I’m looking for more unique experiences which most my age don’t offer |
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It seemed to be written covering all options:
* couples and single females
* preferably older and all ages (you put aged btw)
* 21 years old and bring a level of maturity
* mainly dominant and want to be tied up
* do a social first and jump straight in
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Reference to all your photos, but there are only two. You say 'straight' and yet the majority of your displayed friends are TVs (that's fine, but some may question). Personally did not like the biting, scratching stuff. Also your age range 18-99 seems undiscerning.
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"I’ve got 2 public and 3 private no nude ones at most topless. You think I should add more? And it probably looks alright now due to everything being so helpful "
Maybe one or two more public to tantalise your intended audience, but it’s of course entirely your choice 😃
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Actually, I've changed my mind OP, it's rubbish, completely embarrassing in fact. You're probably best off on another site tbh.
Right, one down only another 234,567 to go before fab domination. Mmwaah-ha-ha-ha |
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Just a warning, some people, not me, have a thing against Crocs with socks. I wouldn't make that fashion choice myself but accept that the younger generation are just not on my fashion wavelength. |
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It's good to keep it focused, so that you don't lose people who are distracted by stuff that's of no interest. It's a fairly good profile. More pics would help us to better assess how attractive we find you and understand how you look. |
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"Hi everyone I’ve been on fab for about a months now and just now made a proper bio anyone feeling nice and generous that could take a peak and let me know if it’s alright and appealing to my target audience. Thanks"
Would you really fuck someone who was 99 years old |
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Crocs and socks is only frowned upon by people who havent tried it! 
In general its not bad at all. However, the sentence about being a bull for an international couple who visit a couple of times a year, written by a 21 year old make you sound like a bit of a fantasist  . It may well be true but for people who don't know you it sounds a bit trumped up. Id think of another way of wording it. |
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