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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

In an older post it was recommended I have a profile re-write now done what do you think

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By *oodmessMan  over a year ago

yumsville

you should add an S and remove the R from ya name:

lovestain

Shows a little humour rather than cheese

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By *adybee77Woman  over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

double stuffing? Yup DP is ok, but that phrase is a turn off for me.

"understand anyone's personal kinks/perversions should hear some of mine" doesn't read well... after perversions, there should be some sort of punctuation, and perhaps the word "you" - as in you should hear some of mine.

"I love to give and give more as one of the things that gets me off the most is the fact that she’s because of what Im doing and seeing the satisfaction on her face." that she's because of what doesn't make any sense.

I am genuine, clean, shaven, cut, athletic, attentive, discreet and very energetic - wow very descriptive... but I read it as exciting as a shopping list

Well done for washing at least once a day - but really you've stated your clean, you don't need to tell us how often you wash.

Personal choice from me - put the cock pic as friends only... save a little mystery.

Hope that helps

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thanks so far some of your recomedations made

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

I like the 'lovestain' suggestion'

As for "used to be paramedic (comfortable with other men up to the point of dp)" sounds like you've been sacked for gross indecency with vulnerable patients.

Rephrase!

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By *he devil wears pradaWoman  over a year ago

gosport ish


"In an older post it was recommended I have a profile re-write now done what do you think"
Honestly, nothing in there stands you above the thousands of other single guys. Good luck though

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

More slight admendments made

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By *he devil wears pradaWoman  over a year ago

gosport ish


"More slight admendments made"
What parts? You still have the part about being a paramedic, and about washing once a day!

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"In an older post it was recommended I have a profile re-write now done what do you think"

As far as profiles go its better than most and shows you have put a little thought into things.

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Iv changed the paramedic bit around bit and the the washing because i want people i meet to wash at least once a day

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Thank you cinderfuckingrella i tried

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By *Ryan-Man  over a year ago

In Your Bush

I'd say its all pretty good mate apart from the washing bit. That's sounds terrible.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Iv changed the paramedic bit around bit and the the washing because i want people i meet to wash at least once a day"

Maybe save the washing bit for private messages when you get to arranging the meet.

I know it's probably naive of me but I'd like yo think everyone washes at least once a day

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Not sure of there's a hygiene thread, otherwise I'd post this thought there:

when a meet requires an hour or more on a motor bike I'd expect the meetist to want to freshen up after arrival without needing subtle prompting. Not amount of washing beforehand will stop journey-perspiration.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"Iv changed the paramedic bit around bit and the the washing because i want people i meet to wash at least once a day

Maybe save the washing bit for private messages when you get to arranging the meet.

I know it's probably naive of me but I'd like yo think everyone washes at least once a day "

This was exactly what i was thinking!

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

got rid of it

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By *Ryan-Man  over a year ago

In Your Bush


"got rid of it"

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Are geordie men all awful ? Rude ? Can't be honest ? Time wasters ?

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Dont no mean whyd you ask

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By (user no longer on site) OP     over a year ago

Many

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By *Ryan-Man  over a year ago

In Your Bush


"Are geordie men all awful ? Rude ? Can't be honest ? Time wasters ? "

Award for random post of the day

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