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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
It needs work. I'd add photos showing you looking good - suited and booted. A face pic would be nice. You are 26 and can't accommodate, which some people may take as being married. Could be wrong, but it can be read that way. KIK is so passé. Mentioning you are Asian can help screen out people who don't fancy Asians and entice those who do, but frankly I think most people go on the person rather than some accident of ethnicity. Your likes and dislikes are like a shopping list.
Add humour, do 3 short paragraphs. Say what makes you YOU. Why someone should pick you above someone else and then what you are hoping to find.
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for the advice, guys
I took off the warning, as _iew and ladybee suggested. I also loved the beard part. Lol.
I will try and re-form it completely now, as Tina has suggested.
I usually mention my ethnicity as a lot of people are not interested in Asian guys.
I can't display a face pic publicly due to privacy reasons. I do attach one with messages, though.
I'm 100% single but can't accommodate due to living arrangement. What's the best way to state this?
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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago
Titz Towers, North Notts |
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I'm 100% single but can't accommodate due to living arrangement. What's the best way to state this?
Thanks again!"
As you just have, or something along the lines of: I'd love to be able to accommodate, but I'm house sharing with 4 hot blondes/friends/students/Lord Lucan (delete as appropriate) and I like to keep my fab life separate to my everyday life. |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
Newcastle and Gateshead |
"Thanks.
Have changed it around. I think it is better now."
other than the fact it doesn't really say anything about you.... and it doesn't say anything about the people you are after..... then yes!
its a whole bunch on "blah"....... phrases that you think sound good to other people, but if reality dont mean anything... |
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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago
MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire) |
"Thanks.
Have changed it around. I think it is better now.
other than the fact it doesn't really say anything about you.... and it doesn't say anything about the people you are after..... then yes!
its a whole bunch on "blah"....... phrases that you think sound good to other people, but if reality dont mean anything..."
Honestly, it was better before, at least it was original then...
And "wet and sweaty" makes me think of WS.
If thats not photoshopped, you have serious body issues mate, and need to get some medical advice... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Get rid of the comparing yourself to chocolate . It's as bad as me calling myself caramel cos I'm mixed race. Who cares I might taste more like garlic than caramal. Better pic too x |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Are you guys feeling OK? Lol. Photoshop? That's the bathroom light.
I'm open to ideas. My profile might not be very good but I've seen a lot worse.
You guys make me laugh  |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"The bathroom light!  how about a photo where the light DOESN'T make people think 'photoshop'? "
Got rid of it. I have to admit, it does look like it. I never noticed that.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"The bathroom light! how about a photo where the light DOESN'T make people think 'photoshop'? "
I don't know how often i have to discard a pic of myself because the light gives me someone elses bodypart. It's a serious issue. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Wow, thats constantly improving I hope you've got time to sit and wait for all those messages pouring in...  "
Lol. Your sarcasm really makes me laugh
I'm thinking of something and will make it so when I can. In the meantime, just keeping it very short.
Ridicule doesn't help. I don't think I'll be asking for help in regards to my profile again! |
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In all honesty everyone who posts could give you a different piece of advice.... and you could take it .... and you would end up with a profile that wasn't yours.
Write a decent profile and read it back and think 'would I contact this person', Your profile needs to sell you... and only you can do that |
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Ok, here is a street full of shops. A potential sex meet is strolling along the street. She's not got all day but has got a bit of time and wants to go shopping. All those shops to choose from. How should she choose? So many all selling similar things....the choice is tricky as she will only shop in this street once and if the shopping doesn't go well, she will shop elsewhere. She looks in the shop windows. Some are bright and interesting and hint and entice her with their display, all set out nicely but not everything. Some things are inside out of _iew. Some shop windows....oh deary me, the shopkeeper is very lazy and hasn't tried at all with his window display. It's boring and not much there. She won't go in that shop. Oh no! She returns back to a shop where she can get want she wants. She will go back too. Other ladies in the street also ignore the poorly displayed shop, see the wonderfully displayed shop window and see other women going in - a little uncertain at times, tis true - but all leaving with what they wanted, a smile on their faces and replete and satisfied. So those women go in as well. Soon, the lazy shop
Keeper is out of business because no one will go in his shop.
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as said lose the silly warning.
Its honestly as interesting and original as a shopping list...
