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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi all,
Would really like some feedback on my profile if any of you could spare a minute to make suggestions. Just the usual ways too improve and so forth.
Thanks in advance xx |
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Learn basic punctuation - lot's of people don't bother, but loads of people DO use bad punctuation, spelling or grammar as a filter.
Choose whether you are young/mature/professional.
Few people look for a meet here because it's "convenient", so drop that.
Your boundaries are "not too limited"? If you've got boundaries, state 'em now my friend, or be prepared not to scream when hubby pops your cock into his mouth as you concentrate on Mrs Swinger.
Your photo's can't be used for ANY purpose? Can Mr Swinger show them to Mrs Swinger? - Delete that bit, nobody is going to publish your pics where your mam will see them.
Other than that, it's not bad - certainly a cut above 99% of other single guys already. Add to it a little at a time, try not to come across as a twat and you should do just fine. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Try and write something that actually makes you stand out among the other 6000 single males on here.
Looking for fun? Great, go to Alton Towers. Every time I read that, what I see is "I don't really know what I want or like".
Remove that silly last line. Most people with any sense whatsoever on here loathe those silly disclaimers that are worth exactly zero.
Face pic'd be good but, of course, that's your prerogative. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks all
Will remove last line, had it when joined as seen so many others with something of similar effect.
Face pic is in private as still bit cautious about leaving it public.
Re: my first line, is young/mature/prof a problem? Because I'm young but don't want people to be put off and try and show that by the fact others consider me mature for my age and that I work in a professional enviroment?
Will certainly try and do something with it
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Keen? errr and this paragraph should be a closing. Introduce who you are and what you are about first, people have to desire you you know. What are your best qualities, what are you good at, what do you enjoy?
good luck with it x |
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