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By *entlesteel OP   Man  over a year ago

Boston

Have just made some major changes to my profile and mind think I can improve it more x

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By *otrockloverMan  over a year ago

Newcastle

Most women expect to read the reason guys 'can't accommodate' within the profile text. Might be worth addressing?

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

it reads ok OP but try putting a few commas in...

and would you really want to meet a 99 yr old?

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By *harpDressed ManMan  over a year ago

Here occasionally, but mostly somewhere else

White space...

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Punctuation.

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago

Cute

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By *rightonsteveMan  over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Spelling, grammar, punctuation.....more photos?

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By *entlesteel OP   Man  over a year ago

Boston

Thanks for the advice guys x

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By *inky-MinxWoman  over a year ago

Grantham

I can't read a sentence that long. And a guy who describes himself as dominant, with not explanation of what he actually means, shrieks 'bully' to me.

And for that reason, I'm out

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"I can't read a sentence that long. And a guy who describes himself as dominant, with not explanation of what he actually means, shrieks 'bully' to me.

And for that reason, I'm out "

I think you could give Duncan Balantyne a run for his money!

Back to the profile - I think you need more pics, two fairly samey pics is doing nothing to get the imagination sparking.

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By *entlesteel OP   Man  over a year ago

Boston


"I can't read a sentence that long. And a guy who describes himself as dominant, with not explanation of what he actually means, shrieks 'bully' to me.

And for that reason, I'm out "

A bully I certainly am not

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By (user no longer on site)  over a year ago


"I can't read a sentence that long. And a guy who describes himself as dominant, with not explanation of what he actually means, shrieks 'bully' to me.

And for that reason, I'm out A bully I certainly am not"

I agree. You say you're dominant but don't elaborate. Your checklist lists everything & your write up is very muddled. As a sub, I don't know what you want to do or what you expect. Are you actively dominant or is it something you'd like to try? Are you into rope play, leather, spanking, humiliation, flogging, wax play, age play ...?

IMO you need to be clearer about what you're looking for, put more photos up (only 2 up & they're very similar) and some veri's - social meets, club meets, something like that.

Hope that helps

M x

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By *rightonsteveMan  over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Thanks for the advice guys x"

You're under no obligation to act on any advice given but bear in mind that if you don't change anything, nothing will change. It will be embarrassing to be back here in 6 months complaining about lack of meets with me pointing out that you'd been given advice but chose not to act on it.

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