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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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So not been on fab too long. Always put effort into my messages, be polite, honest, make sure I've read profiles so my messages make sense etc more often than not my messages just get deleted no reply, so any constructive criticism on my profile would be appreciated |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Schoolboy error...you are one of thousands...don't make the mistake of thinking a proper profile will bore ladies. We get so messed about and get such crude or boring messages ...if you were in my age range I'd have scanned your profile and gone "nope" and maybe sighed thinking it's like another leaf in a huge pile of fallen leaves.
I'm philosophical like that |
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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago
There and to the left a bit |
Think of profiles like a High Street full of shops OP - which one would you go in...the one that you can't really tell what it looks like by glancing in the shop window? Or the one that tells you all you need to know displaying it's goods tastefully and invitingly whilst having information about what's on offer?
Now apply that analogy to your profile and answer honestly if you think it's inviting or not, and if you decide it's not (as honestly speaking you should) then change it - take a look around at other single guy profiles for ideas, or do a forum search on 'Profile Advice' and take heed of what's been said in those threads.
Apply the same principle to your pics, to be hinest two of yours aren't bad, but the cock pic is a little odd to say the least, I'd lose it.
Good luck  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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A profile is a cross between marketing - what is the product, what does it achieve, how much it be a good fit for me etc AND a first date - what you say determines the depth of your character.
A good profile will have a touch humour, exuberate class and have a hint of perversion. |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
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"So not been on fab too long. Always put effort into my messages, be polite, honest, make sure I've read profiles so my messages make sense etc more often than not my messages just get deleted no reply, so any constructive criticism on my profile would be appreciated "
Sorry but the cock pic is awful! I would definitely lose it if I were you  |
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"Fresh fish sold here today"
Your profile says you want to swing. Which is an improvement on those that say 'will fill in later'
But what are you into, why should women or couples choose you?
What is your USP? |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I'm a young guy, not interested in dating at the moment as I work long hours so can't commit with limited time
I'm not interested in sleeping with anyone and everyone, one night stands really don't suit. Im on here to meet new people get along with them and find a friends with benefits.
Im very open, honest and polite. Manners cost nothing, I will always be respectful and would appreciate the same in return
Thanks for reading this far any questions ask away"
Opening line - this is a swinging site not a dating site. Saying you have limited time and can't commit - also makes me question do I want to invest my time speaking to you - you might not turn up.
Not interested to sleep with everyone but NSA doesn't suit - erm confusing - You are simply contradicting yourself - especially given the first paragraph.
So rephrase and rework |
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