All I would say is remove the line about it being unlikely to achieve your fantasies, its too negative.
I like your profile picture. I don't know if its intentional but it has a sort of portrait quality to it. |
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I would consider removing the bullet point type profile parts. It feels a little impersonal. More humour and personality injected into it, will make for a more friendly and approachable read. The picture is good, i would suggest adding a few more, to bump up your public gallery though. Good luck  |
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