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Great you've put up face pictures, if that attracts the lady then the profile is your advertisement to her.
The honest truth, you've written a generic profile, plenty of guys write how turning on a woman is their biggest turn on, I see it all the time. But the really successful guys on here, their profiles can be witty, self deprecating and very clever.
Do some research, find those profiles and get some ideas, but don't copy. Nothing wrong with what you have, but to stand out from the crowd certainly takes a lot of work.
I truly hope your successful on here  |
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By *edp.e84 OP Man
over a year ago
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"Op
Great you've put up face pictures, if that attracts the lady then the profile is your advertisement to her.
The honest truth, you've written a generic profile, plenty of guys write how turning on a woman is their biggest turn on, I see it all the time. But the really successful guys on here, their profiles can be witty, self deprecating and very clever.
Do some research, find those profiles and get some ideas, but don't copy. Nothing wrong with what you have, but to stand out from the crowd certainly takes a lot of work.
I truly hope your successful on here "
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"I'm rubbish at writing not my strong suit haha"
No you're not, stop putting yourself down, that's my job 
You've spelt a couple of words wrong 'People and Wanted' two I noticed, however you've used paragraphs and sentences and it makes sense.
A profile is organic, it improves and changes over time, if it's not working, change it. You've only been on a few weeks, give it time |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sorry typos in my last post. You done better job than some blokes on here, pics are ok and you put some effort into writing a bio at least. Hopefully you will get some nice ladies coming along, happy Fabbing mate |
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By *edp.e84 OP Man
over a year ago
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"Sorry typos in my last post. You done better job than some blokes on here, pics are ok and you put some effort into writing a bio at least. Hopefully you will get some nice ladies coming along, happy Fabbing mate "
Cheers mate, if seen some that are just 50 pic of there dick haha |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???"
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol) |
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)"
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play "
My imagination is running wild |
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By *edp.e84 OP Man
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild "
Mine is to now |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild "
Well....Vamp is Scottish by birth, wears glasses, so, she could be Miss Jean Brodie....  |
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild
Mine is to now "
Mrs Vamp? Headmistress Vamp? Ooohh you had best be good you might get a paddle across your bum! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild
Mine is to now
Mrs Vamp? Headmistress Vamp? Ooohh you had best be good you might get a paddle across your bum! "
Miss Vamp. Now, behave...before I suck the life out of you.... |
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild
Mine is to now
Mrs Vamp? Headmistress Vamp? Ooohh you had best be good you might get a paddle across your bum!
Miss Vamp. Now, behave...before I suck the life out of you.... "
Sorry Miss Vamp  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Are you straight, OP?
Iam yes
I'm only asking as you're verified by a man and you are hiding that verification.
He's a mate on hear "
If that's the case and veri is purely to say you're genuine, it wouldn't hurt to display it. To remove any doubts people might have. |
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By *JCouple
over a year ago
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"Are you straight, OP?
Iam yes
I'm only asking as you're verified by a man and you are hiding that verification.
He's a mate on hear "
That could put a lot of women and couples off.
If you can get to a club you can get a few verifications that will balance it out.
Good luck
KJ x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
I'd expect to read something about your Mrs in the profile.
I'm single "
Your pictures tell me you're not single. There's a bra hanging on the banister and a jewellery box in another pic yet you don't have cross-dressing as your interest. Also at least two sets of towels on the door. No mention of a woman in the profile text tells me she doesn't know you're on here.
It may not be the case but that's what I see on your profile. |
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"How's does my profile look???
I'd expect to read something about your Mrs in the profile.
I'm single
Your pictures tell me you're not single. There's a bra hanging on the banister and a jewellery box in another pic yet you don't have cross-dressing as your interest. Also at least two sets of towels on the door. No mention of a woman in the profile text tells me she doesn't know you're on here.
It may not be the case but that's what I see on your profile."
  Wow ! Now that's observation skills, whatever job you're doing thats not crime fighting, you're talents are wasted |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"How's does my profile look???
I'd expect to read something about your Mrs in the profile.
I'm single
Your pictures tell me you're not single. There's a bra hanging on the banister and a jewellery box in another pic yet you don't have cross-dressing as your interest. Also at least two sets of towels on the door. No mention of a woman in the profile text tells me she doesn't know you're on here.
It may not be the case but that's what I see on your profile."
What an answer this is lol, nothing beats a woman’s intuition |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
I'd expect to read something about your Mrs in the profile.
I'm single
Your pictures tell me you're not single. There's a bra hanging on the banister and a jewellery box in another pic yet you don't have cross-dressing as your interest. Also at least two sets of towels on the door. No mention of a woman in the profile text tells me she doesn't know you're on here.
It may not be the case but that's what I see on your profile.
Wow ! Now that's observation skills, whatever job you're doing thats not crime fighting, you're talents are wasted "
Don't fancy angry wife knocking on my door |
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By *os19Man
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???"
. Your profile looks ok personally I would consider having it in short sentences / bullet points you are welcome to have a look at mine to get a better understanding of what I mean.Your a single guy who can accomadate which is helpful on this site.If you can travel it may be worth going to socials and clubs get yourself noticed and some verification it all helps to show you are a nice guy with social skills.Best of luck.
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By *edp.e84 OP Man
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
I'd expect to read something about your Mrs in the profile.
I'm single
Your pictures tell me you're not single. There's a bra hanging on the banister and a jewellery box in another pic yet you don't have cross-dressing as your interest. Also at least two sets of towels on the door. No mention of a woman in the profile text tells me she doesn't know you're on here.
It may not be the case but that's what I see on your profile.
What an answer this is lol, nothing beats a woman’s intuition "
I know right, I house share. Deafinaly single. That's is some good spots |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild
Mine is to now
Mrs Vamp? Headmistress Vamp? Ooohh you had best be good you might get a paddle across your bum!
Miss Vamp. Now, behave...before I suck the life out of you....
Sorry Miss Vamp "
Too late. Attend my office, after class...oh, and bring a friend...or ten... |
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild
Mine is to now
Mrs Vamp? Headmistress Vamp? Ooohh you had best be good you might get a paddle across your bum!
Miss Vamp. Now, behave...before I suck the life out of you....
Sorry Miss Vamp
Too late. Attend my office, after class...oh, and bring a friend...or ten... "
I dont even have 10 friends *crys* ill see who I can grab on my way |
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Although you’ve talked about it OP, your verification is an instant turn-off for us. You’re straight but your mate says you’re “good at what [you do]”? That’s a little weird for us I’m afraid. Good luck though  |
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By *edp.e84 OP Man
over a year ago
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"Although you’ve talked about it OP, your verification is an instant turn-off for us. You’re straight but your mate says you’re “good at what [you do]”? That’s a little weird for us I’m afraid. Good luck though "
That is ture. Thanks |
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By *JCouple
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look??? would love some feed back on mine also "
You need to start your own thread then ather than hijacking someone else's buddy. Then I'm sure people we'll.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"How's does my profile look???
As mentioned earlier, a little re write, something about yourself, and amend spelling errors.
Otherwise, if we were looking for a single guy, I (Vamp), would be interested.
(Sounding like a school teacher....lol)
Sounds like a chance for a bit of role play
My imagination is running wild
Mine is to now
Mrs Vamp? Headmistress Vamp? Ooohh you had best be good you might get a paddle across your bum!
Miss Vamp. Now, behave...before I suck the life out of you....
Sorry Miss Vamp
Too late. Attend my office, after class...oh, and bring a friend...or ten...
I dont even have 10 friends *crys* ill see who I can grab on my way "
Well. As a substitute, hubby will have to nibble your sexy ass instead....  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"How's does my profile look??? would love some feed back on mine also
You need to start your own thread then ather than hijacking someone else's buddy. Then I'm sure people we'll.
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OK sorry |
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